Reviewer: Shameless Signed
Date: February 22 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The obligatory intro
This story is pretty much everything I like to see in GTS literature. The attitude of the girl is perfect, the interactions are interesting, and your poetic imagery really puts this over the top.
I hope you don't mind, but I've started editing/writing over this story, and with your permission I'd like to start posting it here. I've changed some details and have done some pretty heavy editing, but large sections are still your story. I would, of course, be sure to point to you and this story as the source.
Author's Response: Hey, glad you like it. Thanks for the kind compliments. You have my express permission to post your edited version. I have absolutely no doubt this is in need of some heavy editing, i often thought so, even as I was typing, but didn't really have anyone to bounce it off of; and it is always healthy to get someone else's spin on things. Sorry I'm just now telling you this. I'm a month late! But yeah full steam ahead I say, as long as you point to me. :) And I demand atleast 60% of the profits from any and all merchandising, including but not limited to coffee mugs,t-shirts, mouseapads and chainsaws... :)