Elise must cope when her boyfriend Nick, a lifelong giantess fetishist, suddenly finds himself shrunken.
Absolutely great idea of having the shrunken man be able to still protect his girlfriend from even the most horrifying threats. This chapter was very nice to read, the whole attempted rape thing felt really intense.
Thanks! I'm glad the intensity came through. The scene was very clear, I just wanted to relate what I was feeling in that passage.
A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.
Wow. I think this is the first time that I'm reading a story here out of pure interest how the protagonist's fate is going to evolve. I'm totally not into all the foot stuff and the chapters 21+22 made me worry that your story stopped to go anywhere.
But this chapter 23 is just plain awesome. I was smiling all the time and got more and more excited to see Jacks plan unfold, absolutely great how you let that build itself up gradually. I surely haven't read every story on this site, but I've been a silent reader for a long time and this is by far the best and most thrilling bit of text that I've seen here. Well, "best" in the sense that it absolutely glued me to the screen, not that it was the biggest turn-on of all ;)
Really, congratulations and a big thank you. I'm baffled and so looking forward to Carly's reaction. Btw, loved your response "i guess that will depend on whether or not carly kills him in the next few seconds ;)" ^^
I think he should have made up two passwords. One to actually and really stop the program, as he did now, and one to only make Carly think that it's stopped, but actually isn't. So that the countdown keeps running in the background, but letting Carly believe that she reached her goal.
Yeah, he's a dumbass ;)
Please let Sophie save him... please! ^^
Wow, awesome chapter again! Great job in describing Jack's feelings, you really made the tranformation of his will totally acceptable. I also liked the change in Carly's attitude, was almost looking forward to what was up for the two next - I begged you to make Sophie save him, and now that it happened (or seemed to happen), I'm almost disappointed that we won't get to see more of that "loving bond" between those siblings ;)
It will be funny to see how Sophie reacts to Jacks complete brainwashing and his new attitude. Also, are you maybe going to go back to good old torture, only that this time a girl owns a girl? Maybe for a chapter or two ;)
Also, PLEASE make something happen that the shrinking potion and the knowledge about it never face the earth again... I really like the "compactness" of your concept, that only a few people are involved. The end of this chapter makes me afraid of maybe tens of parallel plots, because someone finds the shrinking spray and uses it one someone else again. I think I just don't like the thought of "leaving the original" characters and spectating new ones through their lives..
Absolutely great. Thanks for keeping it up such a long time, can't wait to read the epilogue :)
thanks for the review. the epilogue will appear soon
Very nice and peaceful end. I've stopped reading them for fetish quite some time ago, I'm not that huge feet guy. But in the last months you did a great job keeping me interested simply in the further development of the story. I like it that you granted Jack some kind of "final rest" in the end.
I'd have liked to get some information on how the story went on for Carly though. Is she dead? I thought he just punched her unconscious..
I liked to read the Big Sister Diaries, it was cool to see some kind of contrast between how Carly feels about the whole situation, and what she actually tells Jack how she feels.
Lastly, I say that I'm totally in favor of your spin-off idea. Thanks for everything so far, and good luck :)
he did indeed just punch carly unconscious; i'll probably end up addressing what happened to her more specifically in the eventual spin-off story. thanks for the review!
A guy reveals his greatest fantasy to his girlfriend. Things get a little out of hand.
Hey, I liked it. Should the end remind me of inception? Either way, this kind of ending seems pretty cool. He's either dead, or is going to wake up next to his normal-sized wife. Well, or the gun doesn't shoot or something ;)
I like the thought of the whole thing being just a dream, an adventure that can be escaped, not ending the life of everyone ;)
Thank you very much!
When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday
I'm glad I found the story just now that it already has 5 chapters ;) I loved the way she teased him in chapters 1-4.. so hot! Also, "incest"-stories often come over a bit creepy, maybe ugly, but you let none of that slide in. Great :)
I like that Mia shares her brother's fetish, or rather that hers is the perfect match for his. Hopefully she won't be cruel - a bit (or a hole big lot of) teasing is superb, but I also love the setting that this seems to be about siblings just experimenting, not one enslaving the other for the rest of his life.
As Tiniestofsparks said:
Any direction this story goes is golden
But if I may express a wish: I found it very cool when she told him something like "Maybe I make you the size of a toddler, so you can be my teddy bear". As much as I like small sizes, this seems to be the perfect compromise between "realistic" physical interaction and still total superiority of the girl at the same time. SO intriguing, please make a chapter about this some time :)
This is my first completed story, and a story written as a commission. I'm thoroughly proud of it even though the basic action elements were relatively dictated, and even if it's not perfectly suited to my personal tastes, I think there's quite a few people out there that will enjoy it all the same.
Wow, that was awesome. I love the attitude that she has towards Keith. How she not only knows that she is a goddess to him, but also acts as such. I have to say though, I'd like to see a bit of an introduction on how it came to all this. Still, this totally rocked me ^^
To help with farm work, Kenji purchases a Fyth, a giantess slave.
This is so beautiful and lovely. Please more :)
More coming soon! Thank you!
