Penname: 3nder [Contact] Real name: Ender
Member Since: February 06 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Check out some of my 'Choose your Adventure' stories here!: http://www.writing.com/main/portfolio/view/3nder


Feel free to help add to them ^.^


 


Turn on (Things you will find me writing about): Shrinkage (duh), Watersports, Insertion, Domination.


Turn off: Scat, Hard Vore, Unbirth (I just dont get it..), Feet, Excessive brutality. POOR GRAMMAR! :P


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Reviews by 3nder
Summary:

I decided to let loose a fetish to my girlfriend, Alex. She agreed to try it, but now I owe her...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10818 Read Count: 111135
[Report This] Published: January 22 2012 Updated: January 28 2012
Reviewer: 3nder Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: So it begins.

This story is awesomesauce. In fact I registered here purly for the sake of writing this comment to you and tell you to keep it up!

Only story to line up perfectly w/ my fantisies, normally other ppl take shrunken toilet stuff farther than I like (dislike scat) or the pissing part is just a minor part of it.

 

My only complaint would be a lack of description and sometimes its difficult to follow certain parts w/o having to read it a few times.

Wouldnt mind helping add to this story some if you're ok w/ that OR feel free to steal from/add to some of my own ideas here: http://www.writing.com/main/portfolio/view/3nder

Would be nice to see:

Guy wakes up in mid of night horny, wants to have some fun so he shrinks himself w/o waking her up and starts to have fun w/ her and she ends up joining in (in her sleep) giving him more than he'd bargand for. Along w/ wetting the bed and unkowningly pissing all over him.

(Unaware stuff is awesome in general really)

The part w/ the twins in the BR was particullarly good, maybe revist w/ them parhaps as a party (alcohol is a duretic after all) in which ends up someone shrunk and dropped into an empty glass alcohol bottle and they take turns pissing in it.

Go along w/ what you ended w/ maybe Tanya pisses on Alex to get revenge for making her cum at work etc

 

Idk, just some thoughts. Hope it helps! Really like your style and work so keep it up [:



Author's Response:

I've read your stuff, you do it pretty well. I've got something going and am doing a couple of other requests for the next few chapters(writer's block though), but I'll definitely visit the party idea.

70-Mile-Jenny by Hedin Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Aliens examine a sample of our world to gather knowledge about the terran civilization. When they try to return the sample Jenny gets involved and is enlarged to phenomenal size. She needs a long time to find out what has happened to her and then some more time to accept her new life.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16532 Read Count: 81473
[Report This] Published: November 16 2012 Updated: November 16 2012
Reviewer: 3nder Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pissing section was awesome, need more lol. Overall good stuff.