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The Incredible Shrinking Brother by tinyman91 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

It's the start of a new school year, but things aren't looking up for a certain older brother. I decided to re-do this story after I failed to complete it originally. Hopefully I'll be able to finish this one.

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19519 Read Count: 441215
[Report This] Published: July 10 2011 Updated: February 27 2012
Reviewer: Alphatylon Signed
Date: September 09 2011 Title: Chapter 1: It Begins

Overall a great story but feels too slow in my opinion. Expected her to do a little more to her brother by now. The whole doctor visit just feels like a distraction instead of getting into what she would do to her brother. As for the diaries, I feel that they do not help with the story instead they may provide her viewpoint but I personally think they should be used less often. Personally, I think you should get back to what should is going to do. I am interested to see what may happen to him when he gets smaller.



Author's Response:

I'm trying to make it semi-realistic and in a realistic situation he probably would've been taken to a clinic when he first started shrinking. And the diary entires help us to see her side of things as far as what is going through her mind as she watches her brother dwindle down to almost nothing, as she also finds the sexual charge from being able to completely dominate him.

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