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Summary: Mark and his girlfriend Eve go on a little vacation. Eve convinces her boyfriend to try a shrinking potion she brought along just for fun.
Categories: Body Exploration, Couples , Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12655 Read Count: 146344
[Report This] Published: February 05 2009 Updated: October 09 2009
Reviewer: Azure Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is exceptional!
It is both well written and a creative exploration of shrinking, and does a good job of showing the world (and in particular, Eve) at various perspectives. It also examines the protagonist's powerlessness and fragility while staying a true gentle story. Hopefully, we will see more from this author. 
Great concepts and great writing make this a superb story - read it immediately!



Author's Response: Hi, thank you for the feedback, Azure! I am planning on continuing this story soon.

The Shoot by tinyslave Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

James is tiny, Laura is his caretaker and friend. They make a deal and James ends up getting more than he bargained for.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2806 Read Count: 11556
[Report This] Published: August 27 2011 Updated: August 27 2011
Reviewer: Azure Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Shoot

This story is brilliant.

The interaction between the characters is novel and interesting, and the writing is excellent.

What's particularly impressive is how well the setting and the characters' backgrounds are described given how brief the story is. The scene is quite complex and the necessary background to develop it would normally be cumbersome - however, the author brilliantly paces the story using excellent dialog so we that are both able to understand the action and left in suspense.

This is exceptional, and I hope to see more! 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review Azure, its always good to hear some feedback!

uTopia by gerald Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

The last attempt to save humanity has become hell for its inhabitants. See how three woman friends are trying to alter the balance of powers for the greater good or their own benefit.


Categories: Crush, Gentle, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169493 Read Count: 155335
[Report This] Published: May 08 2013 Updated: November 18 2013
Reviewer: Azure Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Intro - how it all came about.

This is the most brilliant story I have ever read.

The setting is phenomenal.

Almost all conceptual masterpieces have weak plots and characters, but uTopia is a stellar exception with both an intriguing plot and interesting characters which we watch develop.

I find myself wishing I could see more backstory, dwell on the perspective differences between the micros and the Caretakers, and watch the plot develop. In short, I wish there was more of everything. My favorite is definitely the backtsory (in particular, Chapter 1 or Rachel's recollections of 'The Failure').

Thank you very much for posting this, and for continuing to produce such amazing work. 

Please continue working on this masterpiece. The pace the plot is developing is perfect - this is one of the most fascinating worlds I have ever seen imagined, and I the more time we explore it the better.

BRAVO!!! 



Author's Response: Huge thanks for the appreciation and that's just what I have been trying to accomplish. I delights me to see how You liked all ingredients of the story. I can only hope that the continuation will also appeal to Your taste and manage not to disappoint (although I must admit such review sets the bar pretty high).

Sadly, I had a number of "distractions" in the last couple months, but I have no plans to abandon this story - in fact, the next couple chapters are almost finished.. almost...

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: Azure Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2015 Title: None

Another great chapter! I'm very glad to see you are continuing this excellent story. The concepts are really fascinating and their execution is awesome. Please continue writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I am just finishing up the next chapter.