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Categories: Body Exploration, Couples , Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Muscle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12655 Read Count: 146344
Date: August 28 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This story is exceptional!
It is both well written and a creative exploration of shrinking, and does a good job of showing the world (and in particular, Eve) at various perspectives. It also examines the protagonist's powerlessness and fragility while staying a true gentle story. Hopefully, we will see more from this author.
Great concepts and great writing make this a superb story - read it immediately!
Author's Response: Hi, thank you for the feedback, Azure! I am planning on continuing this story soon.
James is tiny, Laura is his caretaker and friend. They make a deal and James ends up getting more than he bargained for.
Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2806 Read Count: 11556
Date: August 30 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Shoot
This story is brilliant.
The interaction between the characters is novel and interesting, and the writing is excellent.
What's particularly impressive is how well the setting and the characters' backgrounds are described given how brief the story is. The scene is quite complex and the necessary background to develop it would normally be cumbersome - however, the author brilliantly paces the story using excellent dialog so we that are both able to understand the action and left in suspense.
This is exceptional, and I hope to see more!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review Azure, its always good to hear some feedback!
The last attempt to save humanity has become hell for its inhabitants. See how three woman friends are trying to alter the balance of powers for the greater good or their own benefit.
Categories: Crush, Gentle, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169493 Read Count: 155335
Date: August 15 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Intro - how it all came about.
This is the most brilliant story I have ever read.
The setting is phenomenal.
Almost all conceptual masterpieces have weak plots and characters, but uTopia is a stellar exception with both an intriguing plot and interesting characters which we watch develop.
I find myself wishing I could see more backstory, dwell on the perspective differences between the micros and the Caretakers, and watch the plot develop. In short, I wish there was more of everything. My favorite is definitely the backtsory (in particular, Chapter 1 or Rachel's recollections of 'The Failure').
Thank you very much for posting this, and for continuing to produce such amazing work.
Please continue working on this masterpiece. The pace the plot is developing is perfect - this is one of the most fascinating worlds I have ever seen imagined, and I the more time we explore it the better.
BRAVO!!!
Author's Response: Huge thanks for the appreciation and that's just what I have been trying to accomplish. I delights me to see how You liked all ingredients of the story. I can only hope that the continuation will also appeal to Your taste and manage not to disappoint (although I must admit such review sets the bar pretty high).
Sadly, I had a number of "distractions" in the last couple months, but I have no plans to abandon this story - in fact, the next couple chapters are almost finished.. almost...
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Date: March 19 2015 Title: None
Another great chapter! I'm very glad to see you are continuing this excellent story. The concepts are really fascinating and their execution is awesome. Please continue writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I am just finishing up the next chapter.