Penname: Juliet [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 16 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:
well i say, i am god

Email me: annie.acosta1995@outlook.com

My text adventure: http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/9r4ry4inaecx_bnbvmcwyw/shrunken-at-a-club
Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by Juliet
A Gift by Tinyone234 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Join Cassie on her quest to gain the favor of the pretty, popular girl Jewel! Will she succeed, or just be another speedbump on Jewel's path of popularity? Read to find out!


Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4429 Read Count: 5652
[Report This] Published: January 24 2015 Updated: January 24 2015
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

the story is of high quality.
very gruesome and bleak.
i hope more of the sort is written.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your pseudo-haiku review! I'm hoping I can come up with more stuff like this myself!

Summary:

~this story has been removed~


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5 Read Count: 4509
[Report This] Published: March 12 2015 Updated: March 12 2015
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2015 Title: Chapter 1: ~this story has been removed~

Youre awesome B)

Author's Response: Thanks man

Summary:

A girl loses a bet.


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 899 Read Count: 10012
[Report This] Published: March 17 2015 Updated: March 17 2015
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Lauren's Sock

The story definitely does good in what you intended to do. It's short, a little bit funny, and there's an effort put into making the story erotic. I don't really find it as something I could masturbate to, but another person could.

I like that the interaction between the two girls seems like something that would actually happen. Humorously enough, on a website with giant women and tiny men, the dialogue tends to be the most unrealistic part of the stories here.

As I've said earlier, the story is pretty much perfect for what it's trying to achieve. I just don't find it to be something particularly stellar or ultraerotic.

Summary:

A teenager suddenly finds himself shrunken to only a few inches tall, with only his younger sister to call upon for help.


Categories: Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4714 Read Count: 21149
[Report This] Published: April 01 2015 Updated: April 04 2015
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 06 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

very weird

Bigger and Better by STC Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A young woman gets everything she wants at the expense of others, but that suits her just fine.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3305 Read Count: 5725
[Report This] Published: July 25 2015 Updated: July 25 2015
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 25 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think that the chatter between the two, while finely written and definitely not awkward, is a little unrealistic. It just plays out like two characters who behave completely inhuman, literally just fetish objects.
I would probably bump the story up to a 4/5 if it had beautiful descriptions, or if the non-dialogue interactions had depth, but really the main attraction seems to be the dialogue and nothing else, so I think it's fairest to rate it based on the quality of that.

Summary:

Heyyyyyyyyyy batterbatterbatterbatterbatter SUH-WING, BATTER!


Categories: Crush, Destruction, Footwear, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1099 Read Count: 3510
[Report This] Published: August 03 2015 Updated: August 03 2015
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstar
Date: August 04 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is a regression from your previous stories. that is sort of to be expected though since this might be unfamiliar territory to you, stylistically.

Tread on Me by STC Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A woman of status has her way with some less-thans in an alley.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1123 Read Count: 3208
[Report This] Published: August 04 2015 Updated: August 04 2015
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is probably your best story yet. I appreciate that you neither focus entirely on dialogue or entirely on interaction as you have in your previous stories, this is a pleasant blend.
My only criticism is that your descriptions are usually incongruent. While some mundane things (such as the state of the small people) are given large amounts of detail, other things like the death of the tinies, sans one (the "alleyway grime" shtick was really nice, I enjoyed it) are written in an entirely dismissive tone.
This is a really okay story. I like it a lot.

Rawr :3 by AnonWriter Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

A cute girl does stuffs with her pet(s) :3


Categories: Humiliation, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Mouth Play, Vore, Entrapment, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2689 Read Count: 17232
[Report This] Published: January 15 2016 Updated: June 18 2016
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstar
Date: January 16 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Lessgo!

Your base idea for this story is something that I can envision as appealing to the audience you were aiming for: /d/, but your execution is painful and misguided.

The narrative itself is perfectly standard for your previous stories. As usual it's so squeaky clean and scrubbed of character that you've left nothing to complain about, and that flaw in itself is incredibly common on this website. I, myself, suffer from it as well, so honestly you would have to go above and beyond to circumvent that issue. I guess it isn't a big deal to anyone but me.

Where your real issue lies is, as stated earlier, your execution. Everything unique and erotic lies in the portrayal of your giantess, and this is where you've failed, for the time being. Your descriptions of this girl, Nikki, feel so "read", like you picked it up from an entry on "emo" from urbandictionary. I don't think you actually researched on any culture or fashion behind the emo aesthetic, you just wrote whatever came to mind. I won't deny that there could be someone out there resembling in taste to your giantess, but ultimately the person you've created lacks uniqueness.

The use of emoticons really gets under my skin, not because the idea itself is inherently bad, but because you use it as an excuse to write a flat character. Nothing about Nikki's dialogue screams "emo" to me except her emoticons. You've used them as a crutch. Instead of actually writing a person, you just made the emoticons all that the person is. That in itself is a failed execution of your idea.

As before, the writing itself is above average for this website, but still nothing special. The real issue here is that, unless you clean it up by the next chapter, you're squandering a perfectly fine idea. That alone is worse than just a bad idea.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I think you and I have different ideas of what I'm trying to write here. I don't go into this writing a 'giantess' and going for outwardly erotic things. 

I think it's the first chapter, and I really do feel you on the whole 'lack of character' and 'basics' deal. I'm partly basing this off of people I know (including myself) so you can blame them for being generic. Everything you write is gonna end up being at least a bit stereotypical, and I was purposefully writing this with almost meme-level cute emote spam.

As for plot being 'basic,' well, wait for the next few chapters. I literally just spent 1000 words in what's about 5 minutes of real time, a quarter of which were spent on describing a shoe box. So needless to say, we didn't get far yet.

Summary:

Two young men find themselves suddenly and mysteriously shrunken on a trail in a local park. With the various dangers in the park, they embark on a trek to find safety, or to get help from anyone who may see them.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Unaware, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Gruesome Shorts (GTS)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4129 Read Count: 6660
[Report This] Published: March 12 2016 Updated: March 12 2016
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Breezy Park

If this is some sort of commentary on racism in giantess stories, it's fucking amazing.

Author's Response:

Wait, what? Where'd you get that idea from?
If it's because the guys were Black, that was purely out of personal preference, not of any agenda or commentary. I've made a number of my male characters in my stories Black, mainly because I myself am Black.

Summary:

Just as a heads up before you begin reading: this is a primarily feet centered story. If you like feet, then you're in luck. But if you don't really like it, then there won't be much more for you. Sorry!

NEWS 2/13/17: I'm adding a new section to the Story Notes. There will now be a Character Bio section, that gives a brief description on all the characters that Nick can interact with during the story.

http://www.strawpoll.me/12158886

(# 1 best)

http://www.strawpoll.me/12182298

(top few)

This is a story about Nick, who is a college student who shrinks one day, and needs to get the help of the giantesses that he knew as his friends. This one is set in the university library, where anyone could be lurking around studying or just hanging out.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Shrunk at College
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48858 Read Count: 146477
[Report This] Published: July 18 2016 Updated: March 13 2017
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: 2nd Floor of the Library (Story Start)

I like your story. Normally I am repulsed by foot content, but your heavily unaware style has allowed me to appreciate it more.

I've seen your writing.com additions as well, I wish you could bring over some of the girls you've written there to this interactive.

Part of me wants to criticize you because you don't format your paragraphs at all. I used to have the same problem, and now that I separate them more readily, I feel that my stories are more readable. Maybe that would help you too.

What I want to see is more personality from many of your characters. Orfino seems to be the most popular because she is the one with the most of it." Maybe try to include more conversations or write unique actions that each character takes, give them a schedule that shows their interests and what they are like.

It's a shame that my favorite girl, Nesi, doesn't seem to be getting any love on the strawpoll. Maybe you can take some time to give her one more chapter for the time being? It's been a while since you've done anything for her.

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the feedback! I'll try and address all the points you made.

Well I'm glad that you still like the story, even if you normally don't like the type of focus. I am glad that I added that disclaimer, so you'll know ahead of time what the story will focus on. And I'm happy that even though you don't really like the type of content, I got you to appreciate it a bit more. That's pretty cool.

And that does sound like an interesting idea with the Writing.com stuff. But most of the characters I've written about there were already established, so I wouldn't want to bring them over here too. But feel free to send me a message if you had something specific in mind though. It might be better to message/email me on Writing.com though, because I'm not entirely sure how well the messaging system works on this site.

And I will admit that I have a habit of making my paragraphs lengthy. I'll try and look into them, and find more areas where I can split them up. The length never bothered me, but if it makes the whole reading process worse or more of a pain, then I'll see what I can do.

Your comment about personality definitely rings true. It might have been because a lot of the older characters, like Alena and Nesi, were some of the earliest ones I ever wrote. In fact, I first wrote about them in an interactive on Writing.com. I spent a good while writing chapters on the first 3 Shrunk in College routes, plus a few others, but then the original creator deleted all of my work. I think he wanted more guy on guy stuff, and he never had any of those rules or guidelines at the time, so I ended up taking all of these characters (I backed everything up thankfully) and made a story here. So the newer characters, like Allison Kim and Ms. Orfino, were made after I've had more experience writing.

But I will go through my older chapters and try and make the personalities more unique and interesting. I have a few ideas to change some of the characters, so they're not all nice and playful, which is probably how I wrote them before. I want to overhaul them, so they end up feeling just as interesting too, because that'll make me want to write about them more as well.

As a preview, I'm gonna make one character pretty gentle but also very assertive. Once the MC is discovered by her, she will absolutely not want him to indulge in his new found interests in feet, no matter how much he tries to convince her, because she would find it much too dangerous, no matter how durable he thinks he is. It'll be interesting to have a character not want to indulge in the giantess fantasies, since I've usually written them the opposite way. I think it'll prove to be a fun dynamic.

And I liked Nesi a lot as well, since she was one of the first characters I wrote along with Alena, and I've actually been working on an outline for a new Nesi chapter. I'll try and make her new personality more present as well, so hopefully you enjoy that one once I finish it.

But thanks a lot for the feedback! Take care!

The Hunt by AnonWriter Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Kim tries to find her missing friend, but where could she have gone?

In a world where tinies are literally treated like bugs, it's going to be incredibly dangerous to navigate a single backyard.


Categories: Entrapment, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Humiliation, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1090 Read Count: 3121
[Report This] Published: August 13 2016 Updated: August 13 2016
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Missing

Your use of description is very effective and well groomed. I like that you depict a world where small people have adapted to their lives and have tools like carved out ladders to move around.

I like the Tessie character, she has a cute description. I'm looking forward to seeing how she develops.

I would say that you could make your sentences slightly less formulaic and allow them to flow into one another more freely. If a sentence seems like it reads like a list of actions, try harder to integrate one into the other.

Thanks for writing and posting.

Author's Response:

Thank you, yea I'll try to put more into the sentence flow.

Summary:

One young mage's quest for revenge turns into her worst nightmare at the hands of a cruel knighterrant. 

Commission for Socalmosquito (i don't know his/her gtsworld handle)

 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24143 Read Count: 21665
[Report This] Published: October 29 2016 Updated: April 17 2017
Reviewer: Juliet Signed
Date: December 06 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like your story. It gives a great deal of setup that I appreciate, I don't know if everything was planned or generated by yourself as you wrote it, but the environment is easy to get immersed into with your extreme descriptions and detail. The entire atmosphere in the camp reminds me of the smaller towns in Skyrim, or of the Fremenniks in Runescape.

This setup did, however, drag on for a long time before anything happened. It's always been my preference to begin stories at the start of action, so that is just myself. I don't know, the story wouldn't work without the setup but I also wish it were shorter. Maybe some of the detail could have been sacrificed.

The interaction in chapter two gets repetitive over the first half of it, where she climbs up the ass and falls down and goes higher then in the crack then out and so on. However, it picks up when she finally escapes from the ass and gets to the vagina.

As a whole, it's good and fun. You are a talented author. Good luck finishing your story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've been trying to address the particular challenge of length vs quality, and I hope I get better soon. I will certainly try to. Thanks for reviewing!

Quickly Eaten by supernova Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A short, to-the-point first-person soft vore tale.


Categories: Giantess, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1043 Read Count: 3116
[Report This] Published: February 11 2017 Updated: February 11 2017
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi supernova. I dont understand why someone would give you a single star for such a stupid reason either. I havent read your story but heres 5 stars anyway.

Summary:

Alex heads over his friend, Daisy's house to hang out. However, they soon get very hungry and as Alex goes to get the popcorn, something very unexpected happens to him!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2383 Read Count: 11165
[Report This] Published: August 01 2017 Updated: August 02 2017
Reviewer: Juliet Signed
Date: August 02 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You say you don't like hard vore, does that mean you don't like digestion either? It's sad to see a good story end right before the best part

Author's Response:

No. Hard vore just refers to tinies getting crushed to death by the teeth of the predator. I didn't add in digestion because it was just a short story, but if you'd prefer that kind of ending, I'd be more than happy to add it in. Also, I'm familiar with your work and love it! I especially love your Dying Naked Vomit Girl story!

Summary:

A man finds himself in a bizarre situation in a bizarre place. And as far as he can tell, there's only person who can help him.


Categories: Feet, Footwear, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1574 Read Count: 3461
[Report This] Published: October 15 2017 Updated: October 15 2017
Reviewer: Juliet Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a great first story! I love unaware death and few artists want to write about that nowadays, I’m very glad if you continue to write it.

Author's Response:

Thanks, it's something that just makes for interesting stories I've always felt. Hopefully will be putting more up in future.

Summary:

Denys é um cara que acabou fazendo uma escolha errada em visitar sua ex-namorada, e acabou se tornando escravo eterno de suas decisões.

 


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, BBW, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3282 Read Count: 3224
[Report This] Published: October 25 2017 Updated: October 26 2017
Reviewer: Juliet Signed
Date: October 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Visita

Eu traduzi o primeiro capítulo.

https://pastebin.com/g9P4nUmb

Author's Response:

A tradução por acaso ficou ruim no tradutor?

Summary:

A college student tries to capitalize on a beautiful student he sees eating alone, but pays dearly when she turns out not to be the delicate, wounded flower he expects.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Couples, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Gamma Tau Sigma
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4232 Read Count: 2722
[Report This] Published: May 09 2018 Updated: May 09 2018
Reviewer: Juliet Signed
Date: May 09 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Snack Time with Li

is the narrator unreliable?

Author's Response:

Incredibly.  He's a boring Nice Guy who thinks he deserves a model girlfriend despite being nothing special, and that nothing that happens to him is his fault.

Summary:

A late night trip gone wrong from a beginning writer. More an exercise in description and scale than anything resembling a story.

warning: little action, lots of flowery writing, both things i'm trying to work on

new warning: this was quite a sobering lesson on editting


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1159 Read Count: 1806
[Report This] Published: September 14 2018 Updated: September 14 2018
Reviewer: Juliet Signed
Date: September 15 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your writing is too detailed. You should put detail into the action and be terse with non-essentials.

No one comes here to read the background unless its very engaging and adds context to the erotic part. Having an extended intro that serves no purpose other than a massive pile of pointless non-sentences isnt great when writing a story.

Your melodramatic writing lacks a distinct voice. Truthfully nothing actually good stands out, only bad things do. I strongly recommend you focus on not mincing words. Put detail where it belongs.

Your grasp on grammar and what-have-you is fine so its just a matter of experience. Youll slowly learn what truly demands your time and get better.