Reviewer: closetslave1 Signed
Date: July 06 2022
Title: None
Another great chapter. Considering that English is not your first language, you do write pretty good. I'm going to assume though that 'Chock' is 'Shock'. Is that correct?
Your opening chapter mentions torment within shoes. WIll Adam be getting some of that soon as well? I do hope so...
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments
Yes "Chock" was meant to be "Shock", thanks that you mentioned it, it is now corrected as well as
couple of other errors that I noticed had slipped in.
Since english is not my native language and I hate making errors, so I always do a spell-check 2-3 times over, but yet
somehow errors do still seep in, so I do appreciate when corrected.
"Your opening chapter mentions torment within shoes. WIll Adam be getting some of that soon as well? I do hope so..."
Yes, that is actually the main theme this story is going be about, these first chapter are kind of prolonged prolog and my reasoning is
that I want to paint an enviroment for Adam, thats why he is first in a roll as an "Witness" which gives him memory`s that I can use later on.
"torment within shoes" Yes, there will be lots of that, there is a footware that I always prefer to use, but I also do mix it up so to say, to broaden
up suitability towards different tastes.
Thanks