Reviewer: closetslave1 Signed
Date: February 08 2021
Title: Chapter 1: Part 1
Yes, that makes perfect sense, F00tprint. Preferences aside I think that realism trumps it. Well, as much as being shrunk and becoming pretty much invulnerable can be real of course, but I get your POV. You clearly are thinking deeply on the details of this story and I'm really happy to see you go wherever you feel is best in future instalments. I'm sure that whatever you come up with will be as thrilling as the previous chapters are, and I really like where you're going with the curious client hearing something.
Will he be shocked and put off, will he be casually dismissive, or will he be wanting her to show him more? Indeed, by the very nature of their likely clandestine arrangement, will our dominatrix perhaps find that she is enjoying having a little foot freak beneath her feet, and then choose to keep him and not allow him to leave?
So many ways this story can pan out...
Author's Response: Yep, so many ways it can, indeed. ;)
But it's probably going to be a few weeks, or maybe a little longer, before I'll be able to get out my next installment. I had a snowed-in weekend, which gave me ample time to write and refine these two first chapters. But the roads are clear again, so I'm back to driving again (yeah, trucker inRL if you can believe it!), so unless I get snowed in again, I'll probably only have the ends of the months to work on my story.
That said, if you haven't already, you might give Part 2 another read. I just did a little tweaking to it, added some description here and there, but the things I did gave a it little more umph and a little more impact.
Either way, once again, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And thank you very much for dropping me your reviews. Those are always appreciated.