I love the progression of the plot of this story, especially in this chapter.  Incorporating the different attempts to persuade the woman within each different genre, crush, vore, voyeur, etc, is veyr original, and I hope you do more!

I was really hoping for a nice little ending, where the protagonist ends up swallowed alive, but, maybe that's a little far.  Oh well, this series of chapters is my favorite out of the story.  Very well done!

Wow...this chapter absolutely revolutionized my approach to non-voyeuristic vore.  I was able to enjoy this chapter as much as many of the micro stories that I typically enjoy, even without the vore.  

I sent you an email, just in case you missed it. :)

Not bad.  This sort of thing is not really my speed, so I won't leave a rating, because it wouldn't be fair rating, but it has potential. :)

Lots of potential here!  I enjoy the plot building, but I hope to see you incorporate some of the themes you added in the next chapter.  I'll give you a rating then. :)

Always good to see somethign new (well, something we havent read) from you.  I will say that I'm a little disappointed though, it sounds like you dont plan on doing much with this, which is unfortunate, but regardless, it's the start of something very cool.

The genres forthis story aren't really my preference, so it would be unfair to rate the story, so I won't.  However, the storytelling is absolutely enrapturing, and though I wanted to skip past the giant male parts, I couldn't, because I was afraid that I would miss important plot.  You had me under the impression that you were new at writing...now I know very differently!  Im excited to see Wendy's descent into the dark power she's been introduced to.

It's been a while since I last really, really looked forward to a story update here, but you've got me hooked!  For a first attempt at posting a story here, you have by far outdone the standards most people shoot for.  There are so many elements here that I appreciate going in this story, some very obvious, some not so obvious.

For example, I'm a huge unaware and footplay kind of person.  Flip flops are in my top favorites for women to wear while interacting with shrunken people.  Starting the story out with that kind of content already had me interested.  However, a more subtle idea that you've used (and there should be more of this) is having the woman nearly end her friends' lives under foot, and soon after, she becomes as small as them, enduring the same problem with another friend.  It's a very humbling concept and gives a very tangible emotion to the story, and a better sense of perspective.

Speaking of perspective, mentioned in earlier comments was how you haven't made much mention (that I've seen) of their specific size.  Intentional or not, that tends to work for very select stories, yours being one of them.  I prefer much smaller sizes, and this allows me to assume the group is the size I like.

Finally, the introduction of a character who is aware of the situation, and re-introducing the footplay in a whole new way is refreshing, like buying your favorite brand of cereal after trying a different brand for a while.  It's familiar, and yet new, again.  You've done a good job keeping is exciting and anticipating the mood of the story very well here.  I hope to see you not only continue this story, but add others as well!