Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: June 22 2017 Title: Chapter 56: Angela Awakens

I loved she masturbated with him inside her panties :-)

The chapter ended in its best and Angela is probably far from giving him a break. His desperate coughing and whining and squirming just intensifies her pleasure. But the erection of his miniature penis will reveal to Angela that her little pet was actually born to serve women like she is. 

Author's Response:

Oh yeah, He's going to become exactly what she wants him to be, ...and, he'll have to learn his place in this gigantic new world.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: June 18 2017 Title: Chapter 54: Melancholy Daze - pt 3

There are so many nice scenes in this chapter :-)

The way she grabbed him from her purse - the thumb from the top to his chest and the ring finger from behind between his legs. Sitting like that naked on her finger = pure helplessness :-)

And then how he repeatedly hugged her middle finger :-) I just liked those finger scenes very much.

I am not extraordinary into large breasts fetish but I love her large areola (dark in my imagination) and firm aroused nipples - being shrunk and seeing this from below would make me feel weak.
Her full wide-set hips swaying from side to side, heavy thighs and butt with few extra pounds make Angela a gorgeous woman in my eyes :-).
And then her thick growth of curly hairs beneath her panties are so arousing. I just cannot wait until Denny is confronted with this beauty. With her smell after the whole day, with her soiled panties. My imagination just runs.

I also love the last scene how Angela tells him he is going to be her licktoy :-) and that he must earn his keep. That was wonderful.

I am really curious what Angela has in store for little Denny.
Maybe she could use her Hitachi magic wand vibrator too ;-). While little Denny would lick her clit she could intensify her pleasure by pushing the vibrating device from behind his little head.

The little tease with the bib reminds a blog-article of a dominant lady where she described how her sub is required to wear the bib when he eats her :-)

Author's Response:

    Haha, yeah, ...that Bib thing was just an impulse item, I thought that I edited that out, ... oh well, WTF! ;`)

  Next chapter, is already up, ...So,   C'mon man, you gotta keep up!  ;)

 Thank's LT!  

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: December 22 2016 Title: Chapter 32: 'Bath Time - con't'

I absolutely love this story and last chapters with Amy are my favorite.

 

I would like to point the following part out:

 

I looked up at her, trembling with fear, ...as her wide smile continued to grow larger, reflecting her intentions. She was completely infatuated with the idea of dominating me and if I showed any sign of resistance to her playful teasing, I was treated with an ever-increasing manner of imaginativeness. 

 

I love how Amy slowly unleashes her dominance. How she plays with Billy and laughs at him while he is trembling or struggling for her amusement and pleasure. I hope there will be more chapters with Amy. With plenty of her giggling and Billy's trembling. Maybe she could start to use him as her personal little servant too. Thanks for the grate story. P.S.: I love the level of detail in your stories.

 

Author's Response:

Thank's Licktoy.  Your opinion is much appreciated.  I really strive to infuse 'just enough' detail.  I like to slow it way down - so that you can almost 'feel' what's actually happening.  My first drafts are nearly twice as long, ...and after several proofreads, and a few re-writes, it gets trimmed way down... Lol!  

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: January 09 2017 Title: Chapter 33: A New Attitude

Welcome back :-)

 

I like how Amy's personality evolves. She is not abusive but she is getting more and more dominant.

 

I think it was a nice moment when she told Billy she could give him to Jazzy. Although I would not probably enjoy another chapter with Jazzy I liked how she demonstrated her power. She knows how Billy is terrified by Jazzy and if she decides to give him to her he would be probably whimpering and begging her not to do so.

However I think Amy should use this weapon wisely and not in every occasion because then it will be not so effective. Maybe she could find also some other punishments he would be truly feared.

 

 

I also liked several other moments. E.g. how she considers him a thing. Then when she openly tells her D/s fantasies and also when she is getting more demanding telling him she wants he is her little slave doing everything what she tells.

 

 

 

I would love to see Billy is sexually aroused when Amy treats him like her little slave. Then she could ask him if he enjoys to be her obedient slave. And he could look down and say yes.

 

 

The level of detail is excellent.

Author's Response:

Thank's Licktoy!   Yeh, I agree that using the 'idle threat' of - giving Billy back to her young daughter, could be easily 'overdone'.  And, that repeating it more than once would kill its effectiveness.  Maybe, she will find some other ways to persuade him into doing her bidding, without too much, extra effort...  ;`)

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: February 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a fantastic story. Please do not give it up.

Author's Response:

I just had a bunch of crap happening all at the same time, and I had to put this on the back burner for a while.  I'll keep at it and try and refocus my efforts.  I'm glad you're enjoying this little tale, ...it's one that I have always wanted to do but just never really had the insightfulness to pull it out.  Although, I might get a few chapters ahead and then have to drop out for a time - I'll definitely return to it as soon as possible! 

Thank's again LickToy!  ;`)

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: June 03 2017 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I think Angela, a heavy-set nymphomaniac mature woman with secret fantasies to dominate men is a very interesting personality for this story!

She was abused in previous relationships and now she needs to cure her sore soul. Maxine as her therapist understands the best would be if she could experience quite opposite than before. If Angela would be in charge now. Therefore a tiny man she could easily control would be very beneficial for her therapy.

But probably not any tiny man is suitable for Angela ;-)

I think the best for her cure would be a tiny submissive man. A true submissive who would suffer humiliation and pain and unfairness he would genuinely rather not experience and who would be genuinely fearful of punishments for infractions but paradoxically deep inside he would crave to be treated like that, being controlled and helpless in the power of a dominant woman.

She would definitely need somebody like me :-)

I loved very much the whole scene how Tom was sitting naked on Maxine thigh gripping to the edge of her skirt. Helpless, humiliated but excited. That was simply excellent!

Also how Tom awoke in Maxine purse wrapped in the pair of her pantyhose was very nice.

And finally I liked Angela asked if she could have Tom for few days.

I am looking forward to see how Angela's dominant nature will flow out of her.

Author's Response:

Thank's,  LT!  "May I call you LT?"

   I had a bit of difficulty getting this one out.  I had read and re-read, this entire chapter as least a dozen times, (before posting) and It had gotten tp the point, where the scene itself, had lost all meaning; I was just reading 'meaningless words'.  It had already been nearly two weeks since my last update so I just went ahead and posted it, ...reluctantly.  I didn't know what to think about it, ...the original draft was slightly longer and I lost part of it during editing, (screwed up email account) So, I was slightly worried about how it would go over...

  After reading your review, though, I re-read the chapter, once again, and...  it actually was pretty good, wasn't it!  ;`)

  Thank's Man, You have no idea how much that helped!!!

 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: June 07 2017 Title: Chapter 51: 51 'Mr. Yum Yum'

I love domestic femdom scenes very much. So I liked how Angela was thinking about using the little man. And how she felt empowered and aroused.

But the most erotic scene was when Angela got amused seeing Tom wiping his hands into her pants. You wrote:

"Tilting her head to the side, trying to contain her laughter. Just a slight jiggle slipped out as she covered her mouth, her belly shook and her breasts bounced as she attempted to control herself from bursting into a fit of girlish giggling..."

That was just perfect. Very nice psychological moment showing Angela is sincerely amused by the effect of her dominant behavior - which is so erotic!

I liked activities Angela was thinking about for her little man. Just for further inspiration here are some others I can imagine:

• collecting crumbs from the carpet

• collecting crumbs from Angela's clothes while she is eating and relaxing in front of TV. (He is not allowed to eat them (that would be stealing) but only putting them back into her plate).

• collecting toe nails after pedicure

• cleaning Angela's toothbrush

• removing hairs from Angela's hairbrush

• cleaning the toilet brush

• shampooing Angela's curly pubic hairs (I would love if she is not shaved.)

 

... rewards when he is a good boy:

• Angela rubs nutella chocolate on her anus and he licks it clean.

• Angela sits him straddling on her leg and let him hump her pantyhose thigh. She may let him hump also her ankle or crotch. He is never allowed to cum without her permission. 

• He may sniff her anus, crotch, feet, soiled pantyhose, ...

• Angela gives him these rewards in front of her friend (e.g. that one she watches the porn with)

 

... punishments for infractions:

• taking away the privilege to use hands or to speak

• corner time

• caning with a ruler

• flogging with stinging nettles

• taping him to the inner side of the toilet lid and then ignoring when she uses the toilet

• wrapping him in a lace except the head (like a mummy) and securely hanging him into the front part of the toilet bowl so that he is in the water up to shoulders. Then she uses the toilet as if he is not there. 

Angela would use punishments to reaffirm her authority. So after each punishment they do a small ritual which gives him a way to affirm his submissive role. E.g. she stays above him hands on her hips. He drops on hes knees and kisses her feet. She then squats and allow him to kiss her anus. If she feels horny after punishing him she then takes him and uses him as her living dildo.

His name could be e.g. Deny (like orgasm denial which is my favorite fetish too) :-)

 

Author's Response:

   Ew yeah, I really like the idea of   "shampoo-ing"  of her curly-bush, or even just sitting there in it, while she watches u-tube vid's, or casually sits at her vanity brushing her hair...  ;`)

 The Nutella on the rim sound pretty kinky!  Lol!  Maybe some whip-cream, too! (From the squirt can) Oh, Yeah, humping that panty-hosed ankle, as she casually sits crossed leggged - bouncing her foot, flipping her toe!

  *The puishments i.e. 'Stinging Nettles'  "Yowch!"  I once grabbed a handfull of those when I was pulling weeds! Son-of-a-Bitch! Them are some wicked weeds!  My hands were raw for the rest of the day! 

  ...I like Deny.  Denial and tease, slow torture and humiliation.  Foot and Ass worship, ...severe punishment in order to mentally control him - almost to the point of mentally breaking him - almost !!!  Got It!

 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: June 15 2017 Title: Chapter 53: Melancholy Daze - pt. 2

Very nice chapter!

Same as in previous chapters I like the level of detail. E.g. when you described how Angela slid to the edge of her seat and her thighs spread apart :-) Or the whole scene how Angela got Dennis into her palms. I also like very much you describe smells.

The best part was how Angela loved to tease Dennis to make him blushing and embarrassed. She simply enjoyed "torturing" him :-) And he could do nothing about that. Or more precisely his personality (good man, but weak and maybe a bit shy?) prevented him to do something. So Angela's natural dominance started to smell Dennis is the right man for her :-)

So now Angela finally got Dennis. He is shrunk and helpless in her power which gives her endless possibilities to dominate him :-)

I am really really looking forward how this continues. How she will become more and more demanding and poor Dennis will be more and more like her slave :-)

Author's Response:

  Thank's LT!  I'm just letting my imagination take over, ...I can't say for sure how many chapters this part will be, but, I told myself when I started this, that, I'm not going to rush it!  Lol!  The slow process seems to work better for me. The focus being on subtlety and visualizations - and the idea of keeping a steady flow going -  creating a good personality for the characters and maintaining it the same, throughout the story. And, always maintaining a constant underlying fear of the unknown in the background.  That's my recipe! I hope it works!  ;`)

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: July 23 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I like this story very much and I think chapters 15, 16 and 17 are just excellent!

There was a nice part in the chapter 15 when Roberta reported how Kyle ran away from her when she wanted to use him instead of her pink toy. She acted like a loving caring woman who is not appreciated by her selfish and insensitive Kyle. Roberta put the whole group against him. All women were shaking their heads in disbelief at his behavior and provided Roberta the full support in her intention to force Kyle to be her dildo.
And all that was happening while Kyle was stuck between her ass cheeks for the time-out. (Although he was a good boy that day doing as she told him she still found an excuse to shove him there - just because she enjoyed sensation of his desperate squirming against her butt-hole.)
I would love to see more such mind-fucking scenes.

And then chapters 16 and 17 are just excellent. Your description how Roberta uses Kyle without any scruples is so terrific! I think these are probably the best written giantess femdom sex scenes I have read so far!
I really hope there will be more of that.

The idea with the glued boots was very nice. Looks like Roberta is getting pretty creative :-).

Also I liked Roberta brought Kyle close to the climax but she did not let him cum - anyway the purpose of the man of the house is not to cum but to satisfy the woman.(If Roberta controls his orgasms she would get a tremendous power over him.)

So I am really curious how this will continue. Especially what she has prepared for the next round.
And how this relationship will evolve. Maybe Roberta could introduce some new femdom rules and rituals for Kyle?

Looking forward for the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: May 19 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Life of a pet

I have just found your story and I would like to say I like it very much.

In general I like the concept of a mature dominant giantess woman and a young shrunken man.

But what makes this story different is that Johnny has submissive desires. That irresistible need to helplessly serve a sadistic dominant woman. Of course it does not mean he will like all things she will do to him. In fact the most of them certainly not and he will be genuinely fearful and suffer pain, humiliation and unfairness. But as a true submissive he receives an overwhelming mental pleasure from seeing she gets a great pleasure from his misery.

I am really curious how their D/s relationship will evolve.

I am curious if she introduces rules, rituals and punishments. Maybe she will enforce a strict orgasm control so that he will be constantly horny and in the submissive mood always searching ways to please her?
Really looking forward for next chapters.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the review! The need to serve her and the attempt not to cave to it is what I'm going for here. I'm not sure yet about introducing strict rules. Of course there'll be some but things like orgasm control probably won't be included much here. I have another story planned for once I finish this in which that aspect will feature heavily though.