Penname: Jaabbaaa9481 [Contact] Real name: Jaabbaaa9481
Member Since: April 30 2023
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Nothing by sickpuppies Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

My eyes are open, though my body refuses to move. I am trapped, somehow transformed into a lowly ant, and left paralyzed on the ground. Will my family help, or am I doomed to be trampled under their massive feet?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Animal, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4964 Read Count: 40461
[Report This] Published: February 18 2015 Updated: February 22 2015
Reviewer: Jaabbaaa9481 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One of my favorite stories, you really nailed it. If you weren't such a good writer it could have been repetitive but your writing just grips the reader and holds him in this horrible situation. I'm not a great fan of death so I would like to imagine a happy ending where the little brother actually rescues his big brother, but this is still a magnificent story as it is.