Penname: ellenoire [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: January 02 2022
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi! Name's Ellenoire... or, well, I go by many aliases, but this one seems to stick around the most~ I hope you enjoy the occasional pieces of writing I may push out~


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Reviews by ellenoire
A wish come true by Milla Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Hector is on the train going to work. It's just another ordinary day… isn't it?

Copyright: This is a story written by me, and all characters/situations are my original work or are used with permission/'expectancy of permission' from other authors (which are mentioned in such cases). There's no intention of disrespecting anyone's work.


Categories: Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2746 Read Count: 9879
[Report This] Published: July 04 2023 Updated: July 04 2023
Reviewer: ellenoire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2023 Title: Chapter 1: 01. Lucky cookies!

I'll preface this with the fact that I'm so glad to see you back. There's no amount of words that would do justice conveying that feeling. I'm just really happy to hear you've managed to pull through <3


Anyways, onto the aaaactual review. Your pacing is as good as I remember. There's not a bit of detail in it that I felt the story could do without, and as far as I can tell, that's a point that most writers here miss. You shine just as well in other areas, be it your phrasing, or sentence structure. Even my nitpicky self can appreciate it all ~


All in all, I really hope to see more from you again! <3



Author's Response:

Ellenoire!! <3 Thank you for your kind words, I'm so happy too! I thought it was the end for me but well, thanks God I'm here, safe and sound :D

Also, thank you for enjoying my work and write style, it makes me more comfortable with the way I write. You know, there are so many good writers here, including you, and it's impossible for me not to compare myself. I'll improve everyday, of course, but I'm happy I'm already pleasing you with my stories.

I plan to post a new story per week or so, and I already posted another one, so every now and then, there will be another story here. :)

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.