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Playing With Their Food by Tocinodorado Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

This will only be a two chapter story. The first part will be the official story, and the second chapter will be alternate endings to the story.


Categories: Odor, Giantess, Vore, Unaware, Mouth Play, Footwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3061 Read Count: 11431
[Report This] Published: February 09 2018 Updated: February 09 2018
Reviewer: CCreation Signed
Date: May 19 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Playing With Their Food: the Official Story

I don't like that there was surprise M/m action, and that you described Paul's mouth in more detail than Jackie's. M/m should have been been included under the size roles on the table of contents. Otherwise not too bad.

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