Just a mediocre writer, writing some mediocre stories.
A FETISH AT SCHOOL GOES WRONG WHEN YOU GET SHRUNK AND NOBODY KNOWS EXCEPT YOUR EVIL TEACHER.
Caps Lock is not your friend.
Trigger ,Harry ,Dom and Mitch are daily robbers but what happens when they shrink themselves to rob a house and everything goes wrong.
Well...you fixed the Caps Lock.
And THAT is why we do not do acid and watch ABC.
Author's Response: Super LOL!
Joe gets a new roommate, amazonesque basketball player Alex. But it's not all roses when the pheromones released in her sweat seem to have a strange effect on him. The sweet girl might not be so nice forever when her trauma and desires comingle with the state of her dwindling roommate.
Easily one of the greatest stories I've ever read.
Thank you! That's a big compliment. Let me say that I really like your story "A Matter of Boredom" so far, and I hope you continue it.
With a super secret and powerful weapon stolen from a government base the weapon quickly falls into the hands of stacy, a cruel and evil 13 year old. Overcome with power she decides to use the gun to get her way and to punish everyone who has ever "wronged" her.
A fantastic story by a fantastic author. I eagerly await the next chapter.
thank you
A boy is subjected to torture in a all girl school while alone and three popular girls of the high school decided to increase the torture of poor teenager by very high.
Character names-
Tyson,shrunken and enslaved teenager,main victim of the story basically.
Jessica=Main antagonist in the story.
Jennie=Friend of jessica,later in the story dies from a unexpected reason.
Jennifer=Buddie of jessica.They are best friends compared to jennie.
This story focuses highly on emotions and thought of the shrunken boy called tyson.
It also focuses on humiliation of the shrunken boy and cruelty of the giant girls.
It also focuses on feet mainly,100% feet.
I dont really expect reviews anymore,it would be cool to get them though,to see what kind of shape the story is in.
I write this story for my enjoyment mainly
That's it,have a good day now.
I enjoyed reading this, but the language barrier is obvious. It can be really difficult to learn a new language, let alone write a story in one.
The content and subject matter of the story is excellent. I hope that you'll continue to expand your vocabulary and keep writing. Try to keep your story organized in paragraphs, and use a little less spacing.
Once again thanks for the ideas and your support.This will be my main story as im afraid to say that shoesaler's story is over.I'll try make this something very big and i will try not be slacky with all my best.Thanks again survivor aka jimi jamison/burning heart fan haha =D!
A young girl comes into posession of a jewelry case, entirely unremarkable sparing it's fascinating contents.
Been writing this one up for a while, so it will be the first story I will post in chapter format, seeing as it is yet to be finished. Also the first micro (as opposed to macro) story I've written, so do point out any incongruities or improvements I could make.
Would love to have comments, reviews, and critique. Thanks.
Absolutely excellent. One of the best stories I've seen in quite some time.
