Penname: slave4ever [Contact] Real name: David R
Member Since: March 20 2011
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A Little Blackmail 2: Carly's Pet Brother by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

A brother, shrunken to a few inches tall, is held captive by his gigantic younger sister and forced to endure further challenges as she takes revenge for his blackmailing plot.


Categories: Odor, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59553 Read Count: 448515
[Report This] Published: May 19 2011 Updated: May 25 2011
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Date: May 22 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Amazing Human Chewing Gum

Wow that was great, I just love how helpless Jack is in this chapter. Just when I think there isn't anything left to do to this guy. You come up with something awesome like this. Great job.

Dave



Author's Response:

jack may be my personal "fictional character i might consider wanting to die before being"

 

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Date: May 21 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Inconvenient Surrealism

Wow what a chapter. I loved it. The double teaming in the dream was awesome.



Author's Response:

I just couldn't resist bringing Jenny back for one last visit

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Date: May 21 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Tongue Twister

I love how jack is humiliated but feels good in Carly's mouth. It must really be messing with his mind. This was a great chapter.

Dave



Author's Response:

hehe, thanks.  my basic, unspoken goal of each chapter seems to be, "how can i screw with jack's mind even more this time?"

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Date: May 21 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Sip of Death

That was awesome. The whole escape from the closet was really exciting. And jack realizing he had to drink sweat from his sister's sock to survive. I loved it. It had to be so degrading for him to realize that.

I'm starting to wonder if Jack should give in to Carly before she really does start to not care about him at all. I think I would have given in by now. But I guess if he did the story would end. I'm not quite ready for that yet. :-) Great job. Keep up the great writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the wad of five stars you keep giving me, bud.  i'm glad you enjoyed that chapter; it was one of my favorites to write, since i really wanted to try and use jack's solitude to let him try and reason out what to do, which i try to make sure i do on occasion throughout the story to keep the "human" connection there, but i of course had to make sure that his mini adventure ended a bit on the unfortunate side :)

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed
Date: May 21 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Painful Aftermath

Just wanted you to know that I added you and your stories. To the favorites part of my account here. Keep up the great work. And thank you for writing such entertaining and fun stories.

Dave

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Date: May 21 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Carly's Mouth Kitchen

This was an amazing chapter. You are becoming my favorite write on this site. The way you have Carly taking care of Jack but at the same time torturing and humiliating him is fantastic. I hope there ls a lot more to come.

Dave



Author's Response:

i'm flying by the seat of my pants here; as long as i can sit here and think "hmmm... this would work," then there will be more ;)

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Date: May 20 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Kiss My Ass

I loved this chapter. I really like the Carly character. I love how mean and inventive she has been in these stories. You must be having a blast writing her. Keep up the great work.

Dave



Author's Response:

i am having an embarrassingly fun time writing her; honestly, she's based EXTREMELY loosely off of a girl i know who is of course a bit older than Carly, but she has a similar personality: not mean in any way, just kind of pushy, so i have a bit of inspiration there...

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Date: May 20 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Mistaken Misogyny

Wow I just read the first 3 chapters and I'm loving it. Cant wait to read Jack under Carly's butt.



Author's Response:

glad you liked it; i'm really trying to vary the kinds of ways she tries to get him in this story

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Date: May 21 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Anatomy Lesson

Wow what a humiliating and original rape scene. I also love that you can write chapters so fast and still have them be so fantastic. 

Rise of a Princess by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

A curse placed on a princess causes her to steadily grow. However, when a dark threat looms over the land, her large burden may be the kingdom's only chance for salvation.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Crush, Gentle, Growing Woman, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Slow Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Size & Sorcery
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110218 Read Count: 256437
[Report This] Published: May 23 2011 Updated: June 29 2011
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Date: June 29 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Visitor

Well it took me quite awhile but I finally read the whole story. I loved the dream sequence.

This was a fantastic adventure story. And even though I don't normally read this type of story I honestly liked it. In fact I liked it much more than I thought I would.

Dave

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Date: June 20 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Brawl

You sure are making this very exciting, Sorry I haven't been reviewing more often like I have with you other stories. But. with this story I have been reading the chapters a few at a time. I am liking this story much more than I thought I would. I'm not usually in to princesses and that fantasy stuff when it comes to giantess stuff. I prefer things like your Carly and Jack stories. But this story is really fun. Great writing.



Author's Response:

thanks bud; i'm enjoying exploring many aspects of this whole concept, so my next story will probably be more in line with your preferences, but i'm glad you're liking something new

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Date: May 26 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Procedure

Well this isn't normally my kind of story. I do like your others better. But I decided to give this story a shot because I really like your writing.

I just finished reading the first 5 chapters and I found my self really enjoying it. I really like Caroline. keep up the good work.

Dave



Author's Response:

thansk for reading, I'm glad you were able to keep an open-mind

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Date: June 04 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Plans

This has been fun so far. Much more than I thought it would be.

Dave



Author's Response:

hey, thanks, i'm glad; it's cool that you're willing to read stories that are maybe a little different from the genres you normally enjoy

A Growing Body of Knowledge by littlemac Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 104]
Summary:

A timid young man fresh out of college gets his first job at the public library, only to discover all his coworkers are towering amazons. He finds ways to make it work, but after some time he learns that it isn't a mere coincidence that all the women he works with are tall...


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Maternal, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56492 Read Count: 629792
[Report This] Published: May 24 2011 Updated: August 10 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter, I cant wait to see what happens

 

Dave

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Date: July 04 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow this guy is going through hell. I would hate to be him. I hope he gets back to Jodie.

Great chapter.

Dave

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Date: July 06 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Very good chapter.

Dave

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Date: July 18 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter. Glad to see Hank back  with Jodi.

Dave

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Date: August 11 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

What a great last chapter. This has been one of my favorite stories to read.

David

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Date: June 03 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter

Dave

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Date: July 21 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

A very good and very exciting chapter.I hope you don't kill off Jodi.

Dave

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