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Cleo's Divinity by JustForTribute Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

Chapter 31,32,33 are new, Returning readers start from "Robyn's Trap"

Twenty Year Old Cleo is sent from her people to generate worship energy from earth. The young prodigy has never had any desire to be a Goddess but it is something she finds a talent for as she embraces the power of human worship.

Follow Cleo as she forges a life for herself at the expense of humanity and gets off doing it.

Ultimate Power differences


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Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Lesbians, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79518 Read Count: 131547
[Report This] Published: March 31 2020 Updated: February 18 2021
Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 23 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

nice chapter. i guess now that robyn is a goddess i dont have to feel bade about hating her.



Author's Response:

You're free to hate them all! New Chapter sports lots of casual mortal death, just for you! :D

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 19 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

its crazy how i keep on trying to think of a way for humanity to escape there suffering or somehow fight back but its all just hopeless..(unless this was a JRPG XD) i would most likely just kill myself if i were in these humans shoes.



Author's Response:

I think you have a good chance of survival in this world aslong as you live in a blue zone! :)

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 19 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

lordie...crucified humans??? this is horrible. are kids subjegated to the same stuff? ughh. great chappy. funny how i have to watch something positive everytime i finish with one of your chapters now XD. i pray(lol) this wont ever happen irl. or else we are all screwed. 



Author's Response:

I feel the opposite, I welcome our beautiful sadistic overlords! :D

Aslong as you feel something im glad, even if its pending dread.

Thanks for the words, keeps me writing!

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 19 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

OH i forgot to ask. do your characters have any real life or fictional look alikes? interested in how they look.



Author's Response:

Characters are written deliberatly vague, everyone has thier own view of perfection and im not going to tell people what that should be, I offer defining characteristics so your mind can identify your perfect fit.

Kr - JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 19 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

oh ok. i was just confused about her intentions

 

about the new chapter though it was good like  all of your chapters. I wanted to see cleos mother for a while. the way goddesses treat humans is terrible. i really hate them. humans are screwed no matter what they do. i like that sort of darkness and despair this story has when you get pass the kinky and sexy stuff. that humans are just destined to suffer. kinda sad when you think about it too much. looking forward to they next chappy



Author's Response:

New Chapter shows just how little human life means to the girls with power, To clarify in the new chatper(Robyn's Divinity), Robyn is outraged at her sister, not feeling sorry for the humans. She doesnt like her youngest sister being so public.

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 17 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

to respond to your response. i see. thhey arent all getting screwed over but alot still are  going by cleos diet and sexual urges. i just dont understand why she would be afraid of tianas world but then jamming humans in a jar and putting them in a freezer to cook or blend them. or use them for sexual plesure(all seeming to be innocence who worshipped her). i get that this story is about that stuff but it makes it confusing.



Author's Response:

Just so I understand you, You are looking for a Goddess fetish story without any of the mentioned powerplay? So an extreme gentle Goddess story?

~JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 16 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

i dont really see the point of cleo crying and being scared of what tiana does to her humans if what she does to her humans is arguably worse then what tiana does. intreresting chapter 



Author's Response:

The difference is that 99% of humanity are left to live thier lives of thier own free will. Shes not reducing the whole population down to mindless farm animals.

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 16 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

welp its nice and all she wont treat them like tiana does. but there kinda still getting killed anyway by an arguably more degenarative manner. kinda defeats the point. another good chappy as always 

 



Author's Response:

All things in perspective. Next chapter is another quick maintenance one before we drop into some more playful content again.

Thanks again for the feedback

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 15 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

holy.fucking.shit...I...wow..im all fucked up after reading that. i was not expectig that. humans get treated like shit. i thought cleo was bad..jesus christ..its like this with other planets too? this is terrible

 

damn..actual cows get treated better then that..im actually kinda terrified now.

 

kids have to go through that hell too? ugh i gotta sleep this off. Amazing chapter. really makes me feel dread

 



Author's Response:

Yea, you inspired this chapter so you have only yourself to blame! :)

Kind regards

JFT

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 13 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

welp robyn is a monster now. hate her too



Author's Response:

Reading this made me want to write something adding more story context.

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 11 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

i like the dudes idea below me



Author's Response:

Done.

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 09 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

wait..so robyns parents are going to get killed? even if they arent thats your won godamn girlfriends parents! damn i hate her. i havent read a story that made me feel this much rage towards a character. this is a really good story for that



Author's Response:

They are locked away in Robyn's ring for aslong as Cleo decides. They are not going to die though, They have an agreement.

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 08 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

i forgot to add this but are the olyimpians all women? this is a really good story. makes me incredibly sad for the humans and what they have to go through. it makes it infinitly worse that there is a whole race of these gods so fighting back is hopless. the human races suffering will seem to never end unfortunatly. 



Author's Response:

Okay so, this is not something I've gone into with too much detail. The Olympian race in this universe are the same size as humans in their own realm, hence why Cleo originally came through at normal height. Also it will be written soon that only the women have apptiitude for divine magic, because this is a fetish story and Goddesses are awesome.

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 08 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

damn cleos a real asshole



Author's Response:

She likes to make sure people know who is in control.

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: April 18 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cleo's Divinity

the response to your response to my response(lol). no i fully know what to expect. its just that cleos intentions are really confusing. like she dosent want humans to be farm animals but she stuff them in a jar in a freezer? its not a problem with the genre of the story but more of a problem with the character. like..it feels that the tiana chapter was made to try and paint cleo as a better person and it works for  second until you remember this is the person that killed millions of men,women and children and forced a princeses to destroy her own country and kill her dad mentally breaking her. it just makes her crying in that chapter questionable. this could apply to robyn too. At some moments she is scared about what cleo is doing to humans but was literally the one who was controlling the princess killing all of those men,women,and children.



Author's Response:

I guess I was trying to show perspective. Cleo is trying to rule as a Divine authority, and views tributes, sacrafices & her daily needs as a perk of her chosen method. Tiana was ruling as a Farmer, breeding humans into dosile creatures with no spirit at all. Cleo's issue ith Tiana's method is that to her it feels like a massive waste of human potential.

Shes not pretending to be a nice ruler, she just wanted to show humanity that even with her lusty genocide, shes stil thier better choice.

Robyn is living day to day as if it was her last, she does whatever Cleo wants and tries to enjoy it the most she can. Her perspective on humanity is warped by her proximity to Cleo and the realty of being 400ft tall. Being forced to walk through racks of broken people your own size watching that horror , knowing it could easily be you should circumstances change is going to break someone like Robyn.

Kind regards

JFT

A Giantess in the City by Joyce Julep Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Claraføster is a 19-year-old giantess who belongs to an amazonian tribe of women called the Hyrrokkin. They have only one source of food: normal-sized people. Most of the Hyrrokkin live together in isolated, rural areas, but not Claraføster. She's different from the others -- she lives in the city, because the humans from the city taste better. And most while most Hyrrokkin are only around 20 feet tall, Claraføster stands over 26. She's fascinated by humans, and thinks they're the cutest things she's ever seen. She's a gentle giantess, but she's also very, very hungry.


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24456 Read Count: 48348
[Report This] Published: April 07 2020 Updated: May 03 2020
Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: December 16 2021 Title: Chapter 1: A Cold Wet Night In the City

reading more of your stories and this is an amazing one as well



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, deathpenalty!  I'm glad you're enjoying it! <3 

My Sister is a Demon by Joyce Julep Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

"My Sister is a Demon" is a slow-shrink, slow-growth story that will end up being around 20-25 chapters, and it tells the story of Clayton Williamson, a 17-year-old high school senior who was raised by his mother after his father abandoned the family when Clayton was 5. Turns out, he abandoned the family to be with Kazehana Asmodeus, an alluring, tall, voluptuous woman who is actually related to Asmodeus, the ancient Demon of Lust. In exchange for 13 years of servitude, Kazehana promised Clayton's father fame and riches. The thing is, though, that as soon as Mr. Williamson entered onto the contract, any time he felt lust for Kazehana, he would shrink a little. And he did feel lust for her....a LOT...and he shrank accordingly.

Our story picks up right after news comes that Mr. Williamson has died. No reason is given for his death. Clayton and his mother have to go to Kazehana's house to answer for the contract -- Mr. Williamson has died after 12 years, and 1 year is left of his contract. And either Clayton or his mother must take his place.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Humiliation, Incest, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96722 Read Count: 167002
[Report This] Published: June 05 2020 Updated: June 21 2022
Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: December 16 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this story is great. is lydia also the main characters half sister?

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: December 16 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great story cant wait for the last chapter

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: May 08 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i would also like to comment on how much i love you focus on the main characters helplessness. even if he dies hes just going to get tortured more.

MAJORS/Minors: Deanna's Journey by Kurogane335 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

So... after much relfexion, I decided to share this completed story from my patron. I recommend to read NotSirk's MAJORS/minor main story and also The Subjugation of Rembrandt Logan !

Anyway, I hope you'll like it, I'll update it here and there !


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, BBW, Futanari, Gentle, Maternal, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63571 Read Count: 38612
[Report This] Published: June 14 2020 Updated: December 06 2021
Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed
Date: September 22 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A talk with Daddy

this is VERY VERY good just like your past work! looking forward to any future chapters or works to come.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot ! It'll be finished this week :) !

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