Phenomenal writing and creativity; I particularly like the social hierarchy humiliation here - the way that the girls are rich and pretty spoiled (Mel at least), and the tinies mostly still have to toil away at jobs etc. it makes the system so much crueler for the lower-siders. 

Would love to see some taunting or other humiliation along these lines (e.g. Mel buying up swathes of tiny real estate easily and slowly dominating/humiliating her tenants - kiss my toes or I’ll double your rent kind of thing). 

Totally awesome world you’re building here, can’t wait for more! d84;a039;