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A continuation from Dance with Fire, set in NotSirk MAJOR/Minor universe. I highly recommend reading his story to better understand this New World Order and all. Dance With Fire may be interesting, but I'll try to develop it without too much call back, for new reader's convenience. I'll try to put out a chapter every Saturday.

Rated: X
Categories: Lesbians, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Violent, Watersports Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 140550 Read: 36195
Published: February 03 2018 Updated: October 09 2018

1. Farewells by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 16] starstarstarstarstar (3677 words)

First chapter for my longest project here, by far. I'll count on you to tell me where the chapters aren't clearl, since english isn't my native language !

And by the way, reviews are appreciated!

2. Fly away by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] (4030 words)

Chapter two is out a little early, because why not right? Chapter three should also come out a little earlier next week, because I'll have a very busy Saturday...

Also, whatever you thought about the story, leave a review, it's always heplful ! :)

3. Meeting the driver by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (3807 words)

I know, I know ! I said it would be only one chapter every saturday... but I felt like writing this one earlier, and then I felt like posting it earlier so... well, there may be a second chapter out Saturday, so enjoy this one !

Leave a review if you liked the story (or felt some part of it may be improved ^^) !

4. Frustration and acquisition by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] (4214 words)

Finally a Shannon's chapter. it contain lesbian sex, humiliation, watersport and scat. You've been warned !

As always, leave a review if you feel like it :) !

5. Settling in New Orleans by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (4380 words)

A dreaded transition chapter... still, it contain some Izzy and Shannon's mails, forshadowing for the Great Lindsey vs. Giant Gator Rumble and other little nuggets, I think.

As always, let me now what you thought about it in the reviews !

6. First Interlude by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (2273 words)

"But what is an Interlude?" you will ask me. Well, the answer is that it's a shorter chapter from a unique point of view (mostly, some characters may have several Interludes coming) which happens to pop up every five chapters in this story. I hope you'll enjoy this one!

7. Therapist session by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (4276 words)

Another Shannon's chapter, where we will learn a bit more about herself and her past, and some of her employees, among other things. 

Don't forget to leave a review if you felt something reading this chapter !

8. Strong encounter by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (3975 words)

A new chapter's from Lindsey point of view, which should interest you. Or at least I hope. Also, those MAJOR teenagers really are crazy! 

Don't forget to comment if you liked (or even disliked!) this chapter :) !

9. Course correction by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (4034 words)

I felt inspired by NotSirk latest entry of the main M/m story, and wrote it in one go. it's mostly a chapter were Alejandro get the best of MAJORS in his way, so I hope you'll enjoy. It's also the last stop before at least two really... intense, chapters, the first of which may or may not come out this week-end.

As always, please leave a comment ! :)

10. Baila con fuego by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (4418 words)

And it's the long awaited reunion between Alejandro and Shannon ! I hope you'll like this chapter, it's a little on the experimental side (but less than what I had in mind at first). I hope i'll have conveyed what I had in mind well, considering the fact that it's basically the scene which drove me to write New Lives. 

As always, please comment !

11. Intimate confessions by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] (4310 words)

Damn, this chapter was kind of hard to write. I had all the ideas for it for some time now but I've really stuggled with writing it down. I hope that you'll still like it, however. So please, comment it to help me improve !

12. Second Interlude by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (2470 words)

Don't worry, ALejandro's answer will come out this week-end, I swear ! In the mean time, is time to set up two major (eh) antagonists... As always, please comment :)

13. Answer and rivals by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (4146 words)

Who would have thought ! The normal chapter coming out in time ! I had some inspiration writing this one, so it helped a lot! Anyway, remember to read the 2nd Interklude, if you haven't yet ! And please, leave a review :) !

14. Alone time by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (3966 words)

Sorry for the delay. Last week was quite busy and I wasn't at home for the week-end. So this week, you'll have two chapters coming out.

15. Gym buddies by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (4055 words)

Sorry for the slight delay, I had a hard time ending the chapter in time, and instead of rushing it, I've chosen to take my time with it. I'm seeding potential story hooks for the crossover with NotSirk during the period where his Special will run, so we both have a lot to play with ;)

16. Bondage time (part 1) by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (4262 words)

And we return to Shannon and Alejandro. I hope I'll be hable to portray soft BDSM correctly? It's not something I do personnaly, so it's kind of hard to do it justice. Let me know if I failed or succeeded. 

Also, there will be another chapter out this week, considering that next weekend (the last of April) won't have any... because I'm going to Disneyland Paris for three days with my girlfriend !

17. Bondage time (part 2) by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (4327 words)

And here is the second part of the bondage time. Next updte will be from Lisa pov, from the main series, as she prepares for her trip to New Orleans... and the next after that will start the school arc, peoples !

18. Third Interlude by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (2516 words)

And here is the third interlude ! At first I wanted to write it from Lisa POW but it turned out that I was inspired by Linda... must be the big boobs. yeah, it's definitively that. I hope that I'm not butchering your character NotSirk, so please, let me know ! And as always, don't hesitate to comment, peoples !

19. First Day's Revelation by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (4060 words)

And itr's the beginning of school year for the Ferrand ! I hope you'll like this chapter; as always, please, leave a comment to help me craft a better story :)

20. Derek and Joshua and advices by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] (4202 words)

And here is the slightly delayed chapter 17 ! I hope you'll like it. Remember that reviewing help to improve a story :) !

21. Minor/minors? by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (4073 words)

First interactionse with another Minor than Izzy for Alejandro, among many other things... I hope you'll like it ! Please, don't hesitate to leave a review here !

22. Lunch time by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (3939 words)

The first seeds of a great friendship are sowed, now it'll have to be cultivated? By the way, I'm hesitating for the future chapters, past the 20. Do you prefer me to slowly work my way throught this week for Alejandro, until he'll meet Izzy again, or do you want me to directly jump to the time of the special ?

Notsirk's choice is the equal of three votes by the way if he voice it !


23. How was your day ? by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (4637 words)

Finally a new Shannon's PoV chapter. You know what it means : at least a modicum of steam, but it's not just that this time, sorry (or not) ! Anyway, feel free to review :)

24. Fourth Interlude by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (2724 words)

And the Fourth Interlude is out ! You'll learn slighty about Shannon's family tree and a lot about Shawna and Helena, recently introduced. I may also have added to NotSirk's slate when it come to his Special, hehe :p

If you haven't yet read it the CHapter 20 came out earlier this week, so perhaps you may want to look at it, just saying. Also, if you feel like it, leave a comment ?


Oh, also, there won't be another chapter this week, because I'll be busy this week-end, sorry !

25. A couple's workout by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] (4603 words)

Well, this chapter was easy to write at first but then really hard ! I hope I've managed to balance thing out and make it interesting and steamy in the proper way, but dear reader, you'll be the judge of that, I'm afraid. Let me know what you thought about it !

26. Preparing for the friends by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (3752 words)

And here is this week's update. life had been hectic, so I wasn't sure I would manage it, but here it is ! ENjoy, summer break is soon approaching for me, so I won't be able to write for a while !

27. Spilling the beans by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 0] (3629 words)

So, it's one of the last chapters before this story and the Special written by NotSirk will be workjing alongside each other! If you haven't read his work, go do it now, while it's still time!

Also, it'll be the last chapter for the next two weeks at least, since I'm going in an holiday soon and won't be able to write the story. I'll try to update my Random Factory in the meantime.

It's a chapter ending on a rather depressing tone, but I hope you'll like it nonetheless. As always, feel free to leave a review !

28. Standing up to the abyss by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (4092 words)

And here is the new chapter of New Lives. I hope you'll like it. It's the first step toward Lindsey's overcoming her depression and dark feelings but also sets some trouble between the Ferrand's sibling. Well, not too much, but still !

Remember to comment if you feel like it. :)

29. Revelations and advices by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (3823 words)

And here we are, the last chapter (in theory) before my takes on the Special events ! If you haven't read it on NotSirk's story, go for it ! 

30. Fifth Interlude by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (2231 words)

A new vhapter ! It's been too long, I'm sorry for it. It's a flashback Interlude to the first week-end, because NotSirk provided the very idea of it in his SPecial, go read it first ! Also, stay till the end to discover Lindsey's full name...

31. Kris and Vanessa by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (3557 words)

A full blown chapoter with the Ferrand returning to school, discovering more of the cast there !

32. The Bond Plane by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (3883 words)

Already a new chapter, I had inspiration for once. Nothing too steamy here, but the next few ones will sexy time with Shannon. As always, feel free to comment :) !

PS: NotSirk, let me know if I'm totally in the wrong here, I'll correct the chapter accordingly !

33. Flaunting power by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (4061 words)

Important, please read it first !

So, finances are kind of short right now. Nothing that I can't handle or would prevent me from writing, but still, it got me thinking... if I did a patreon (with the minimal backing only, which is 1$ I guess ? I don't really know) would you be interested ? I've no idea yet what I could offer potential backers however, if you've got some ideas, you can post them in the comment !

So, to help me gauge the potentiality of this idea, here's the strawpoll : https://www.strawpoll.me/16340458

Thanks for reading it and voting !

34. About empathy... and sex by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (4242 words)

Another Shannon's chapter -mostly. It's really steamy, especially toward the end.

Also, the poll is still open if you haven't voted yet : https://www.strawpoll.me/16340458

35. One, Two, Threesome by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (3940 words)

Sorry for the longer than usual delay between updates, my work life took a toll here, and when I came hom I simply couldn't write... Anyway, I hope you like this chapter ! We will return to Lindsey soon, and this one is "introducing" the shadier part of this world, in a sense.

Feel free to comment :)

36. Sixth Interlude by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (2361 words)

Sorry for the delay in releasing this chapter. I was hitting a really hard case of blank page, and then life added on it. But here it is! My first chapter ever from izzy PoV ! Enjoy !

37. Friends at home by Kurogane335 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (3605 words)

I've officially written more for this story than anything I ever done before (technically, it was already the case for the last Interlude, but I had forgotten it!).

Also, there won't be another chapter this week or the next, because I'm going to London from Friday to Monday (which is my birthday!), so I won't have time to write anything else before, and then I'll need some energy back! 

So I hope you'll like this one ladies and gentlemen!