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Summary:

When a brilliant lady scientist decides to become a vigilante, using her expertise, convicted felons given life sentences soon discover that in the hands of such a woman there are a thousand ways to die.

Especially when that woman had been brutally raped herself. 

Obviously, I don't intend to list one hunded, let alone one thousand. :-)

 


Rated: X
Categories: BBW, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Violent, Vore, Watersports, Slow Size Change Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 53261 Read: 27403
Published: May 02 2017 Updated: May 27 2017
Story Notes:

Detective Andy Smith is called to a series of bizarre discoveries in his jurisdiction.

As time goes on, they take on a frightening reality to him.

The first two chapters of this story are experimental. Whether I continue and finish the story will depend on the response.

I have my doubts as to whether it will fly.

This is a mystery story, and largely will revolve around vore.

WARNING: Extreme violence. If you are under 18 or are sensitive to such things, please back out now.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

All names are ficticious, and any similarity to persons living or dead is strictly coincidental. 

1. Chapter 1: The Skeleton by BillWilliams [Reviews - 5] starstarstarstarhalf-star (1371 words)

Detective Andrew Smith is called to what is the beginning of a bizarre series of events.

 

 

2. Chapter 2: Tracy by BillWilliams [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (2345 words)

What happened to Mark Jones and how his skeleton ended up in the sewage plant.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

 

3. Chapter 3: The Arsonist by BillWilliams [Reviews - 2] (2396 words)

Another prisoner vanishes from his cell.

A strange fire and a mysterious badly burned shrunken man.

Andy's remembrances.

 

4. Chapter 4: Aaron's Payback by BillWilliams [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (4159 words)

Tracy causes Aaron to suffer in the same ways he caused others to suffer.

But first she gets off on him.

There had been a slight alteration to the end of this chapter, for when I wrote chapter 8.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

 

5. Chapter 5: The Rapist by BillWilliams [Reviews - 0] (2584 words)

This chaper has been tweaked a little since posting -- in the autopsy section.

Detective Andrew Smith thinks that maybe the weird cases of the kidnapped and murdered felons is over.

Until another one shows up.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

6. Chapter 6: Richard's Last Sex by BillWilliams [Reviews - 0] (3181 words)

Richard Roylott suffers and dies in a way similar to what he did to others.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

 

 

 

7. Chapter 7: Carla the Cannibal by BillWilliams [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (2297 words)

Detective Andy Smith is called to another gruesome scene..

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

8. Chapter 8: Carla, a Tender Morsel by BillWilliams [Reviews - 1] (2638 words)

Tracy makes Carla suffer for murdering and eating her family before killing her.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

 

9. Chapter 9: The Enforcer by BillWilliams [Reviews - 1] (1958 words)

Detective Smith is sent out to investigate the case of another shrunken dead man.

This time there is an additional puzzle.

Then a bombshell on the news.

Andy does something he hardly ever does -- he gets drunk.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

10. Chapter 10: Tracy's Crush on Eddie by BillWilliams [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarhalf-star (1864 words)

Tracy gives Eddie a taste of his own medicine.

This chapter is a bit tacky. :-)

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

 

11. Chapter 11: Marcella Communicates with Andy by BillWilliams [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (1553 words)

As Andy tries to relax the night after getting drunk, strange things start happening in his house.

The detective is amazed that he didn't see the signs all along.

I made a mistake. "The Lap Dancer Murderer" is not until chapter 13. Sorry about that.

I'm still trying to decide if Andy dies after Marcella is done abusing him.

 

12. Chapter 12: Eleven Years Ago by BillWilliams [Reviews - 1] (2145 words)

Andy and Marcella meet at university.

They get jobs in their chosen fields, still dating.

Andy forces Marcella, but she takes him back.

Their quarrel.

 

13. Chapter 13: The Lap Dancer Murderer by BillWilliams [Reviews - 0] (2540 words)

Andy thinks and remanences

He finds an object out of place.

Another kidnapping, but with a different twist.

A clue.

Destroying evidence.

The scene at the park.

Christine's near miss. 

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

14. Chapter 14: Luke Walker's Terrible Week End by BillWilliams [Reviews - 0] (4687 words)

Finding himself in a strange place, Luke Walker discovers that he has been kidnapped by the notorious Vigilante.

I found a mistake in timing in Chapter 13, which had to be corrected. I had Andy finding a seashell on Saturday which hadn't been lost till Sunday night -- that had to be fixed.

I see that this episode cannot be done in one chapter -- it will take at least two.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similtity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

15. Chapter 15: Luke Walker's Terrible Week End, concluded by BillWilliams [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (3598 words)

Luke's condition after a night in the box.

Marcella's side of her communication with Andy.

Luke's real payback begins.

Marcella takes Luke jogging.

Luke has done to him something like what he did to Tonya, the stripper and lap dancer.

From this point onward, I will mostly use the name Marcella, even though the woman now goes by the name Tracy.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similtity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

 

16. Chapter 16: Andy Snoops Around by BillWilliams [Reviews - 0] (1464 words)

Andy tries to find Marcella's hiding place.

But he is being watched.

 

17. Chapter 17: Lorne, the Murderous Larcenist by BillWilliams [Reviews - 0] (1055 words)

Andy lives in fear of Marcella as the time draws close.

Then is sent out to investigate another "Possible" shrunken man murder.

Some slight modificatios have been made to this chapter, concerning Janet Cherry.

Further note: While writing Chapter 18, a new character who is introduced there got me so excited that I decided to add some spice to that chapter. Perhaps its because of a girl like her I knew many years ago. That also changes the end note of this chapter.

Lorne's demise will be delayed one chapter therefore.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

 

18. Chapter 18: Youlon's Story by BillWilliams [Reviews - 0] (3904 words)

This chapter tells about the conception of Tracy's plan.

Years earlier a friend of Marcella Rivera's aka Tracy Ramos, shows up at Tracy's place with a terrible story.

This character Youlon got me excited as I wrote, so I added someting to this chapter that wasn't in the story outline -- a bad habit of mine.

If it is not well received, I will remove that part from the chapter.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

 

 

19. Chapter 19: Lorne's Capture and Intimidation by BillWilliams [Reviews - 0] (3411 words)

Marcella aka Tracy thinks she sees Lorne Switkowski in the east, where she lives.

She chesks it out and verifies his identity.

Lorne Long finds himself kidnapped by a beautifuul woman.

He gets to watch a movie, with him in it.

Marcella secures him to a table, in preparation for his retribution.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similtity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.

 

 

20. Chapter 20: Lorne's Punishment by BillWilliams [Reviews - 0] (4111 words)

Melissa Rivera, aka Tracy Ramos, takes up her punishment and ultimate execution of Lorne Switkowski.

This one is persomal, since Lorne victimized and strangled one of her close friiends, then put her body through a tree mulcher.

Because of that, she was far more cruel to Lorne that she was to the others.

None of these cases are taken from real life and any similatity to real persons living or dead, or real cases, is a coincidence. I made them all up.