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Summary:

Kim tries to find her missing friend, but where could she have gone?

In a world where tinies are literally treated like bugs, it's going to be incredibly dangerous to navigate a single backyard.


Rated: PG
Categories: Entrapment, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Humiliation, Unaware, Violent Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 1090 Read: 6176
Published: August 13 2016 Updated: August 13 2016

1. Missing by AnonWriter [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarhalf-star (1090 words)

A rather slow chapter, it'll be worth it.

I wanted to start a story where tinies are literally treated like bugs, so expect that kind of reaction and action. I'm also thinking about how a bug would actually navigate the world and interact. I think this'll be a good experiment.

Do you like the "zoom out" to describe what the giant is doing, or should I remove that? Please tell me in the reviews!

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