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Summary:

Melanie is a tomboy who loves bullying anyone and everyone.

Also, she can shrink people.


Rated: G
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Humiliation Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 3314 Read: 25975
Published: May 12 2016 Updated: May 13 2016
Story Notes:

This is a lead up to a comic :iconSmushedBoy: and I are working on about his OC Melanie, who so far has been only featured in this comic: http://smushedboy.deviantart.com/art/Tomboy-Girl-Punishing-Teacher-557031146

She's a cute tomboy who just loves to torture people under her feet. I really wanted to give this odd feeling of super intimidation from a casual girl who just likes to shrink people because it's more convincing that way. Basically what would happen if a schoolyard bully had shrinking powers and nobody could stop her - even the teachers.

I was kind of dissapointed with how I've been doing a lot of dialogue and 'motions' lately, so I made a conscious effort to not repeat myself, really structure this one more. There's gonna be more to it soon, but we'll see when that comes (I have a lot of unfinished stories like Rawr :3, a Comission, and potentially a sequel to Sock.)


I hope you like it c:

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Got some weird formatting errors, sorry for the re-upload as I try to fix this :

 

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