I wrote this as my third story. I find it very easy and methodical to write. It feels natural. Some of the things you will read are going to be unusual, if you really think about it.
Review every chapter you read, if you will! =)
1. Chapter 1 The Working Man by vgiv [Reviews - 41] (1623 words)
This story is going to be rather interesting, I know. I was originally afraid that it would be too unusual for the site, but I read a few of Carycomic's stories. They are good, and prove nothing is unorthodox.
Please review, and as with most of my stories will be, read the chapter end notes.
2. Chapter 2 by vgiv [Reviews - 7] (2437 words)
Slightly faster pace. Will slow down next chapter.
Please review, Vacation Abroad was meant to be updated today, but this story got nine reviews in record time.
Keep up the review pace and this will be my main story!
3. Chapter 3 Back and Forth by vgiv [Reviews - 9] (1879 words)
Please review. This is now my main story.
4. Chapter 4 Results of Cheating by vgiv [Reviews - 6] (1710 words)
Taking a small break from plot heavy chapters. Trying to get back into the darker aspect that has made this story succesfull. I am looking for at least thirty five reviews total.
Fingers crossed! Okay, serious time...
5. Chapter 5 Where We Lay by vgiv [Reviews - 8] (2385 words)
Review, I worked my ass off.
6. Chapter 6 Walking by vgiv [Reviews - 7] (2934 words)
7. Chapter 7 Return, and leave. by vgiv [Reviews - 5] (1541 words)
Does have graphic content. Not sexual. Please review, and sorry for the wait. I have been planning a way for the next Vacation Abroad chapter to work.
8. Chapter 8 by vgiv [Reviews - 5] (2677 words)
Gets kind of rushed at the end, but I think we needed a break from the dark stuff.
9. Chapter 9 Cliffs by vgiv [Reviews - 5] (1852 words)
Yeah I REALLY need to learn how to end sectons better...
10. Chapter 10 Explanation by vgiv [Reviews - 6] (1320 words)
No Aidan, and as per demand, no sex. Next chapter is more plot heavy. Sorry for the wait, I got a new video game and I have been piling hours onto it each day...
11. Chapter 11 Diana's Prank by vgiv [Reviews - 7] (1446 words)
I am leaving for a week on Monday, so I will add he plot heavy chapter when I get back. I decided to see how lighter stuff would work in the story. Not as well as I thought.
12. Chapter 12 Co Workers Judgment by vgiv [Reviews - 5] (2230 words)
Aidan finally meets his co workers!
13. Chapter 13 Hell to a Human by vgiv [Reviews - 6] (1111 words)
Yup, every story dies down after a while. Seeing how the last chapter, which was the one everybody was looking forward does not have that many reads, I am assuming so.
I watched Transformer's 4. Better than what the critics say, but Wahlberg is not his best.
Slight spoiler, but there is probably going to be a Transformer's 5.
14. Chapter 14 Life Plots, Death Executes by vgiv [Reviews - 2] (2260 words)
I'm back from my trip! I am sorry for the wait. I do however have summer homework I need to do so I'll have to do that, but otherwise, I am ready to pick up the pace on this story.
15. Chapter 15 Increase the Tempo by vgiv [Reviews - 3] (1189 words)
Short, but climatic. Sorry for the low quality I was rushing.
16. Chapter 16 Entrap by vgiv [Reviews - 6] (1899 words)
Quick pace. I have to work on the end of my work... The final few senteces of my chapters... ehhhh.
17. Chapter 17 Trepidation by vgiv [Reviews - 6] (2085 words)
What some people may wonder about my username, 'vgiv', is what it means. I used to have a fanfiction account, but I was REALLY bad. That site sucked on reviews, and basically everything that was not Harry Potter Fanfic. I already knew of this site, but I was hesitant to join for personal reasons. But I decided to. When making a username, I took the 4 most important and repeating letters from my Fanfiction username and combined them, voila my current user. Just a bit of meaning. I was thinking of saying this in a Tomb Raider Giantess story I have planned, but decided it would mean little then. Speaking of which, if anybody does a GOOD Tomb Raider story, like with an actual plot I'll be your best reviewer. Mine is also going to be a crossover with Uncharted.
One or more chapters to go.
18. Chapter 18 Finale by vgiv [Reviews - 5] (1247 words)
Sorry for a wait, and the rush at the end. Tommorow, I'll release the first chapter of the Intersizable series. I honestly hope you guys are excited, tell me if you are. Nostory as well. Just writing the plotline to the first story felt better than the time I won the winning goal in soccer a when I was a little kid. That is how proud I am of the series and the story. So tell me if you are interested in the reviews, and will be reading, all I can say is I have a bit of last minute touching up to do for any speling errors. So please watch for my next update on anything. Thank you guys.