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Jack Davis and his family go to a foriegn nation for Spring Break. But Jack's poor attitude in a foriegn nation leads him into an unusual situation, and he finds himself at the mercy of the hotel's owner's daughter. Jack's attitude will decide how she treats him... Good or Bad.

Rated: X
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Couples , Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 41821 Read: 116959
Published: March 14 2014 Updated: June 19 2014
Story Notes:

This is my very first story on this site. Please review and give me pointers!

1. Chapter 1 Welcome To The Hotel by vgiv [Reviews - 1] (1774 words)

I'll have a bio page up as soon as possible.

2. Chapter 3 First Lesson by vgiv [Reviews - 0] (1877 words)

I hope you enjoy! Please review.

3. Chapter 4 Day At Work by vgiv [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarhalf-star (2605 words)

In this chapter, I was hoping to show some of Lebanon's culture. I did some research for the names of the food and the laungages.

As always, please review!

4. Chapter 5: Revelations by vgiv [Reviews - 5] starstarstarstarstar (2884 words)

Some may not like this chapter. I know. This is my first 'intimate' writing.

This is where advice is VERY much needed!

Anyways, this is the transition chapter from sadistic to gentle.

Review. (As always)

Disclaimer: All publically recognizable settings, products, and people are not mine, but belong to their respective companies and owners.

5. Chapter 6 Reparations by vgiv [Reviews - 0] (1924 words)

I already know that this chapter is going to be 'way to fast' for a lot of people. I can tell, I read the reviews. But, I did take advice from the reviews. Read the end notes to see what I changed.

6. Chapter 7 Dinner and More by vgiv [Reviews - 1] (2606 words)

Please review, it has been a few days since my last update, I know.

7. Chapter 8 Mallika Part 1 by vgiv [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (2322 words)

My first ever 'part 1' in a story! In this chapter, you get to meet Mallika, as promised.

Please review!

8. Chapter 9 Mallika Part 2 by vgiv [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (1723 words)

Pretty short chapter. But I still think it works. Thanks for the reviews, and keep it up! By next wednesday, I wanna see if I can get up to 25 reviews on this story, which at the current rate will be a bit of a challenge.

Thank you for reading!

9. Chapter 10 Movies by vgiv [Reviews - 1] (2159 words)

I wanted to introduce our cinema to our our cast! If you know some of the films, tell me in the reviews. BTW these are my fav movies.

Please review!



10. Chapter 11 Primate Part 1 by vgiv [Reviews - 0] starstarstarstarstar (1919 words)

Please review, I am hoping to get a few more reviews this week, so I have my fingers crossed...

In this chapter, I wanted you to begin to hate Abbas more...

11. Chapter 12 Primate Part 2 by vgiv [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (1902 words)

I was gonna release this Monday, but nobody was posting their stories, so I figured it would be safe. I better get two reviews per person if this gets off the most recent page in a day!


12. Chapter 13 Revealed by vgiv [Reviews - 0] (2092 words)

I was going to post this tomorow but Kilowatt convinced me otherwise in the shout archive.

I had writer's block so I sorta took a detour from the main story for this upcoming bit. Hope you like it.

13. Chapter 14 What? by vgiv [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarhalf-star (1878 words)

Please review and sorry for the wait!

14. Chapter 15 Back In The Game by vgiv [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarhalf-star (1406 words)

It has been a while since an update. I luv this story the most out of all my stories so far.

Hope to see if you guys like this short chapter, I just wanted to show that I am in this.

15. Chapter 16 Set Up by vgiv [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (1530 words)

Please Review. Again, if anybody wants to take over Marooned, just ask. I feel like I'm begging.

16. Chapter 17 Change Of Pace by vgiv [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarhalf-star (1478 words)

This story recieved an all time low on reviews last chapter. Nostory gave me an idea with his review, thank God. He said maybe a change of pace would help. So this chapter was written. I am hoping for a total of fifty reviews when this story is off the most recent page.

Oh, updated bios.

17. Chapter 18 Kidnapped by vgiv [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (1924 words)

My hand is now numb, not in pain. I am hurrying to finish this story, so I can get another one out, then the sequel to this one. Three stories at once I can handle, believe it or not.

18. Chapter 19 Flashback, and Plotting by vgiv [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (2044 words)

The charachters I used for Jacks parents are fodder. I can use them at any time!

19. Chapter 20 by vgiv [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (2455 words)

Two more chapters, smut in the next one because smut will not be in the next Afterlife update. Sex sells. :)

20. Chapter 21 Qods by vgiv [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (713 words)

Short as hell, and sorry, but there is only one more chapter with the plot twist. No smut, there was a blackout that erased the chapter. These last two will be short, but wrap things up. Next chapter will have that WTF moment for you.

21. Chapter 22 End by vgiv [Reviews - 6] starstarstarstarstar (1742 words)