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Summary: Two dudes get trapped with a bunch of girls they were just peeping at.
Rated: R
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4551 Read: 35230
Published: October 10 2010 Updated: November 09 2010

1. Part 1 by pseudoaddiction7 [Reviews - 6] starstarstarstarhalf-star (959 words)
Hello. Just posting what I got so far on this story; it's taking me a while. I'm also working on my capitalization and punctuation, just spent a few minutes hitting the shift key to get capital letters in all the right places. Let me know how I'm doing so far.

2. Part 2 by pseudoaddiction7 [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (813 words)

I'm trying to keep a 'once a week' thing going so I'll stay on the recently added page. If it's starting to show that I'm rushing, let me know. I'm gonna go get some pie and ice cream now :)

3. Part 3 by pseudoaddiction7 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (1185 words)

Hello. Sorry if you guys were waiting; I know I said I'd try to make it once a week. (moment of reflection) I don't think it's a matter of good or bad writing. Some of you might think I'm good at this, some of you might think I suck and make too many errors, others will just get a good night from reading this (wink wink). I think all literature is supposed to be a sort of facilitated communication between the writer and the reader, so it's a lot like a conversation. You can say things that can make the other person laugh when you think it's funny, or you can make the other person laugh without meaning to be funny; maybe you said something where you wanted them to type a frowney-face. Listen, if you and me are on the level, I'm really glad and I wanna hear from you. (end moment of reflection).

Hope you guys enjoy this piece. This took me a week and a half to write (and I just realized myself that there actually is a lot of material here). I'll definitely try to finish this at some point and not leave it unfinished.

4. Part 4 by pseudoaddiction7 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (670 words)

Hello again. I hope you guys don't mind, not everything I submit is gonna be particularly 'stimulating'. But this section made me smile while I was writing it. I dunno, it's good fun.

5. Part 5 by pseudoaddiction7 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (924 words)

Hello everybody. I thought about keeping with my once per week quota, but I dunno what else I can do with this story.

This is the last chapter. I wanted this to be a complete story, so some of you may be disappointed. I dunno, it would just be unrealistic if I took it much farther than I have already. I think I'm ending this better than I ended my first story; so, I guess that's good. I'm improving :)

I plan on writing more; I'm just not sure what I'll be writing about. I definitely need the practice, that's for sure. I need to work on my endings. I have one story in mind that would make a pretty ambitious project, but I dunno if I'll actually go through with it (if I can commit to something for that long).

Enjoy this last part!