[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love gentle giantesses stories, but this one disappointed me. Because it was too short in general terms and in the sex scene. I'm sorry, but I can't appreciate it for these reasons. Make longer gentle giantesses stories, and you'll have more success. That's my opinion, don't give up because of me !
[Report This]Date: July 16 2008 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well the two others pretty much covered it. This story reminds me of the interactives on writing.com where people put no effort into their posts and call it a chapter. My advice to you is to go here.
http://giantessworld.net/viewpage.php?page=tools
That is the writing tools page here on GTSWorld, read the guides.
Date: July 15 2008 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
ts;dr
The story also needs work in the writing style. Not many care about what the time of day is and character description needs to be spread out.
In other words, if you're going to write a story, put EFFORT into it. You have all the time in the world to write a story, don't rush it. Don't write a story about sex if you think you have to. You don't have to, because if you force a sexua lstory, it turns out to be crap
[Report This]Date: July 15 2008 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dude! I can't tell the character quotes from the narrative. Take it from someone who used to make the same mistake. Hit the "enter" key to create inter-paragraph spaces.
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