Reviewer: Star Sage Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2008 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

You are an artist of the word, D.X. I love most of your stories, though some do end a little strangely, but they're always an interesting read. This one was no exception. I will state I would like to see a bit more vore, but then, that's because that's my thing, and nothing will ever change that.

Still, what you create is always good for a voyuer shrinker like myself. The big characters, even when they notice the little person, are rarely out of character evil like you see in some stories, or so normal that they barely react to the fact that someone's shrunk. They're reaction are great. So a good job, and I hope you keep it up.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2008 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 5

Read the whole thing, in one sitting! I'm not normally fond of "GTS-couple/unaware-shrinkee threesome" stories. But, seeing as you wrote it, DX? It was done comparatively more tastefully than others. Thanks!