You are doing a masterful job with the characters. I am really enjoying the torment and mental trauma that seth is feeling over having his heart broke, and how kari feels about him.

 I am actually more curious to see how this turns out in relation to his feelings about kari then i am about the gts stuff, but the gts stuff is nice too.

Can't wait for the next chapter.  Still a solid 10 out of 10 in my book.