[Report This]Date: October 28 2020 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 5 Idols and Teases
Yes! This story is back! Let's go!
Hmm, so Jessica went from the "new kid" to the "popular kid" within minutes. That's crazy. I think she's in a good spot as she tries to fit in with her "friends".
I really like how slow you are taking Phil's character. His reluctance and shyness is soemthing I like in male characters. In contrast, his roomate Jade is a burst of energy. My goodness, she is a confident girl. Also, I love her flirtaceous jabs at Phil, especially when she implied showering together I assume.
Ms. Evelyn is amazing as always. I absolutely love her "I don't give a shit" attitude this chapter. I mean, she just used this new guy as if it was nothing. She was even comfortable telling him about how Simon usually pleases her. To me, that tells me that she has experience and knows how to use it. Love how she made him lick her pussy knowing he wouldn't object. Also, she's a teacher, so it's best not to disobey her. ;)
After this chapter, I think I have an idea that suits this story. People pleasuring others for S points. I mean, it's implied, I don't think there's a dynamic yet of 2 normal-sized people being intimate with one pleasuring the other. When Ms Evelyn mentioned Simon, that tells me that Simon pleasures her regularly. I wonder, does she pay him in S points or each session? I'm kinda curious.
Also, you mentioned how students could get points, but what about teachers? Is it unlimited? Is it a perk for being a teacher? Do they get points for each class taught? Or is it similar to the students system.
Jeremy's arc is interesting. The whole points malfunction concept is cool. However, I feel like 3 days is plenty of time to get his card fixed. I doubt the head office will be like "sorry, ur fucked" to him and would certainly help him out.
Also, that cliffhanger made me laugh. Lmao! It felt so random! I mean, a shadowy figure? Is this a horror movie now? That was great. Reminds me of Halloween now.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!