[Report This]Date: November 03 2020 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 2 Meeting New People
This is such a good story! Really creative and exciting. I'd love to see more feet content, hopefully not from just the chubby girl though since I'm not really into that kinda thing. Please continue this story and thank you a lot.
Date: October 28 2020 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 Meeting New People
I liked the concept of being a girl's tongue stud/decoration. What an experience that would be. Great descriptions so far of various scenarios!
[Report This]Date: October 24 2020 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 2 Meeting New People
Wow! Loving the longer chapters. It's cool to see so many perspectives from a variety of characters.
With Kayla, she's a star student with plenty of tinies. Literally has a tiny serving each part of her. That's crazy!
Then we have Jessica. She now has a tiny and is testing out her new ass slave.
Likewise, Phil has a new tiny. Between you and me, this is something new compared to all of your stories. A guy with a shrunken girl. Normally, I'd avoid such content, but knowing that you seem to be exploring this idea, I'm also open to it. It also makes me wonder, if I was at this school, what if I had a tiny for myself? Usually I would think about me being the tiny, so it's interesting to flip it. Also, Phil is a great character to take things slow with. He's cool.
Then we have Ms Oak. She seems cool too. I like how teachers are comfortable discussing their tinies at this school. Adds an extra element of fear to the students. Man, imagine if she showed her butt plug to them. Lol.
Also, thank you for explaining that star system this chapter. It makes sense now and I could see how it works. I remember in chapter one, that the girls in the "ass slaves" group wanted some 4 star people. So those tinies will cost a lot. Man, it would suck to be acing these classes but you forgot to spend points to avoids getting shrunken, so you end up shrunken. Then with your high price, you hope no one buys you, but if you do, your life is over all for one mistake. That's crazy.
I saw in your response that you mentioned that another teacher similar to Ms. Eve will show up. Hmm, now I don't mean to be greedy, but will there be a Tom as her slave? Part of me feels guilty for having too many "Toms" in your stories, haha.
Anyway, a great second chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks for another great reply!
And because this was a possible test story, I wanted the first chapter to be long to gauge readers on the world and characters. However I found longer chapters work well for the layout I have written. So expect every chapter to have around 1500-2500 words or more. But also that there may be breaks due to the length (not always next day, but I will try).
And Kayla is one of the top students. You will see more students like this, they have enough points to basically treat them however they want. She sees hers as lucky charms so they serve her relentlessly.
And yes! Jessica is slowly joining the Ass Slaves with her own, her arc will explore her basically diving in the deep in with this life.
Phil is an intresting case. I like the idea of a male having a female tiny and have various ideas on how to write about it, but I am unsure how people will react as (iirc) it will be the only M/f content I have written. And like you, its not normally my cup of tea, but the ideas are there. So I will take it slow with him, and see where it and the audience lead it to be. Since Phil is slow on the intake, his experience will be slow and so any content in that catergory is quite far off (for now, unless demand brings it forward)
Ms Oak was my way of showing how (some) of the teachers behave and act around tinies but also explain the star system. I have several drafts where the 'example' tiny was the Butt Plug one, but decided against it since it was the first day for everyone and it felt too fast, too soon.
And yes! Glad you understand it. I felt having everyone be the same price and status when shrunk was too plain and having a system means you have avenues to explore different stories and themes. Its an intresting dynamic I thought of in my original idea and I am glad it came out well in the explanation (which is why i left it for the second chapter to avoid to much information in the first and overwhelming the reader)
And 100% there will and don't feel guilty, your constant reviews give me critical and important insight to all my stories. Its the least I can do is insert a Tom into them. I cannot always gaurantee they wil have a big storyline or impact. But I am always happy to have a Tom in my stories with elements that you enjoy happen to him!
Thanks again for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter (when I finish it) and future chapters.