i think the story is really good but i would really like to see this hero suffer a little, maybe some pain. I would like to see him unknown to her suffer inside her nylons or shoes while she actually is thinking about him as a 1 of past ex bf tht she liked alot. Plus i also think tht when she takes tht guy home she decides not go with him coz deep dwn she likes the hero deep down, and when he leaves she plays with herself and the hero gets trapped between her fingers and her vagina, as he suffers he could get pulled in.  whatever you decide im sure your story would be great but ust passing sum grea ideas tht id like to see this story go into. ;)