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Reviewer: girlfood Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2008 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 5: Off To Work She Goes

nice story. too bad she didn't swallow him though. well written.

Author's Response: Well if she had swallowed him then how would I continue the story? lol Never know how it might end though.

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