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Reviewer: Joeysmiths Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2020 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 15 Team Fractures

Looove this story. I can't wait for part 2. Samantha and Nicole are both great in their own respect with scheming. Great job!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2020 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 15 Team Fractures

Wow, you made that whole event seem very realistic. Other stories would breeze through anything related to the government, but you added lots of detail which I liked here.

Also, 1.2 million more tinies. Yeah, that economy is going to boom now. Haha.

Well, well. We have a tiny employee at the work space. Crazy how Nicole already found her, she is fast. I don't remember Nicky that much, so I guess I didn't find her being tiny as a sad event. I think Kelly will take this personally. It seemed like she liked Nicky so now I could see how Nichole could mess with Kelly since Kelly cares for Nicky. 

Imagine working in a nice company and then the next thing you know, you are a butt plug. That's crazy. 

Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!

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