[Report This]Date: October 15 2020 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 12 The Dinner
I like how Kelly is getting accustomed to the tinies being furniture now. At this point she doesn't mind. However, she does mind farts and straws, so it looks like she doesn't enjoy the more extreme versions, yet.
That bathroom scene was funny. Who fakes leaving the bathroom? Lol. I mean, that shit only happens in movies, lol. So Nichole knows Kelly doesn't like being mean to tinies. I didn't think this was a secret at all since I assumed that since she is from the US, that all her coworkers would understand that it's new to her.
So I'm curious how this is a weak spot for Kelly. Will Nichole offer a free burrito to Kelly in public hoping she refuses or soemthing? This moment felt like a blackmail situation, but I'm not sure Kelly's care for the tinies is enough for blackmail. So I'm curious how this will be used in the future.
As for the new tiny policy, looks like there will be more tinies now. I wasn't going to expcet her teammates to shrink, but now that you mentioned it, it's basically a gaurantee that one of them will shrink. We also know it won't be Nichole, since you love sadistic people so I doubt she will shrink. Nah, probably her boyfriend. Yeah, he seems likely to shrink.
As for the Samantha chapter, that was deep.
I did not expect Jack to just get rid of her sister like that. I mean, now that's sad. Imagine being rescued by your mom and you are now safe at home, and then later, your brother secretly gets rid of you and now there is no way for you to return home. Worst of all, you are stuck as a fart balloon. Lol.
I think Jack is just a jealous, spoiled dude. He's a supervisor so his life seems pretty much in control and the one moment where he isn't being praised as much, he feels the need to eliminate it. He didn't even care about her sister as a person, he only cared that his mom loved a condom more than him. If anyone is going to shrink, I want it to be Jack since he was a dick. He's 23, so there's a chance.
The condom balloon was clever. Not at all what I expected. I thought after she mentioned how condoms were used for dicks, that I thought Samantha was going to put the condom on her dildo and force Suzy to be part of sex toy collection. Well, I guess now she is her fart balloon. I think the milf character I'm looking forward to will likely have turned Susy into a sex toy rather than a fart balloon. Lol.
Ok, I keep thinking about Jack and I don't trust him. I think he is going to tell his mom that Samantha took Susy back and blackmails her by taking a pic or her sister as a balloon or something. I don't think Jack's mom thinks her son is cruel, so she will likely side with Jack and be mad at Samantha again. And then, Jack might shrink and Samantha will get revenge on Jack during those "work" hours. Haha!
This story is mostly Kelly and Samantha so far. Kelly is nice to tinies, but is gradually getting used to them. Samantha is simply cruel to her tinies and uses some of the most creative ways to torture them, especially with her ass. I'm wondering if there will be a sexual giantess in this story. Maybe that's where my giantess character might show up. A woman in her thirties (or early 40s) that is horny as a possible and has her own personal tiny panty pet named Tom. (I'm still rooting for this idea. I think the hard part is where to put it in the story.)
Obviously, the main characters are Kelly and Samantha so a new character shouldn't dominate the chapters. Hmm. Maybe it could be like Samantha's aunt or someone who decides to visit. Maybe she could be Jack's boss. Maybe it could be one of Kelly's coworker's moms. I'm just throwing ideas, hoping they stick to something. Lol.
I can't wait for the next chapter! (I also can't wait for Ms. Eve chapter in the other story.)
Author's Response:
Thanks for another great review!
Yes! Kelly is becoming more used to tinies. Still not 100%, but she realizes she needs to accept them and she is an oddity to not do so.
The Bathroom scene was a way to both show the sneakyness of Nichole and was just a fun scene to do, despite its weirdness. And her being nice is not the secret, its how nice she is. Nichole realizes she will go to efforts to avoid hurting a tiny. So Nichole plans to use this to her advantage.
The new policy will be a way to shake up the group dynamic and have more characters join the shrunk realm.
And yeah, I wrote Jack as this A-hole who was annoyed her sister was this obession with her mom, despite it is just her mom trying to fix that relationship and pretending its all normal. And its because his life is not normal. Dead end job and now a mom who hangs with a condom, he got sick of it. Especially as she gave more attention to Susy then himself.
And for Jacks fate..keep reading, he will appear again eventually.
And the Balloon was something I thought of while thinking of ideas for a condom. I did consider something like what you suggested but remembering seeing videos of condoms being blown up, I decided on that and the 'air; being literall ass gas.
As for sexual giantesses, Nichole very much ticks that box.
Glad your enjoying it and hope you enjoy the future chapters!