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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2020 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 10 William

The arcade meeting Kelly was interesting. I agree, her team seems pretty cool. Felt more like some college orientation than something for work. Lol. 

The straw concept was interesting. So the tinies gotta drink and shit out the drink to each other? Doesn't that mean that the normal sized people are drinking the tiny's shit too? Lol. Hmm, maybe I didn't understand it completely. 

Ah, so William was a bully. Well, looks like the rest of his life is sealed. Also, cool how you mentioned Nichole was a bully too. I guess Nicole will be like another Samantha. 

Love the double-upload and I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for another great review!

The team was a way to intergrate characters into the story while keeping the job theme. I wanted a new setting but also a workplace seemed intresting. As for the college orientation, I feel its more silicon valley themed. The company is tradional, but caters to younger employees but making them feel welcome (thus the arcade). Kinda like those stories of Google and its wacky workplace. 

The straw concept was one that entered my mind and I enjoyed it. I imagine the tinies are modified to have there insides molded with plastic, so the giants taste nothing (the tinys never eat nor drink, so they have no poo nor need to). But with them acting like this, they are forced so close to eachother, even if they aren't the ones on the top or bottom. Think combined together but then another straw is placed inside all of them, so thats what is sucking up all the liquid, but they feel all of it also, rushing through there body. 

Yeap, I wanted to show why Samantha was the way she was. She had a tough school year and its made her bitter and cruel, not unlike her former tormentors. Having one of them turned tiny was an intresting idea I had to explore.

And Nichole is the OG Samantha, her story will appear soon (within Kelly's) and she is super cruel to tinys, on ways Samantha could only dream of. She is also cruel to normal sized people, her boyfriend is basically at her back and call. (but she puts on an act for people around her)

Thanks for reading and glad your enjoying it. Hope you enjoy the future chapters! 

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 14 2020 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 10 William

Samantha is so sadistic! I love it.

 

The concept of a tiny man trapped in the back on a pair of panties is such a good one. Happy to see you using it here.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Samantha is a very sadistic character, I enjoy writing her due to it.

And yes! I love the concept also and wanted to write a great story with it being a major theme.

Glad your enjoying the story and hope you enjoy the future chapters!

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