[Report This]Date: October 11 2020 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 6 POV
I think the POV's are not bad. They show us, the audience, that all these tinies in this world were actual people and you feel somewhat bad for them as they have to experience some of the worse stuff for the rest of their lives.
However, I don't think we need too many of this POV chapters since they don't necessarily add much to the story except more details about the tinies. Hmm, but if Kelly or Samantha happen to get close to an object, then a POV for that tiny I think will make more sense.
Kelly and Samantha are much more interesting, but that could be just because I'm used to them. Also, I'm always biased towards the giantesses. Lol.
This was a nice change of pace. Can't wait for more giantess action. Also, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
The POV chapter was due to a reviewer wanting to see thier side and me wanting to give a short chapter on what it would be like. I don't plan on making another, but I am also happy to continue with more if people really enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it and wanted to do it (the reviewer just pushed me writing it sooner). But its one off unless people want more, in which I am happy to.
Also if I can include some story POV (a POV that follows the story better), I might consider that. But for now, unsure what that could be.
As for a Kelly/Samantha POV, if they do get close to a character, which Samantha will soon (but not in a friendly way), they will perhaps get a mini POV.
And two new chapters of Giantess for you has just been added. Hope you enjoy them!