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Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2021 4:19 AM Title: A Really Bad Day At Work

Another great chapter! A great mix of motivation, suspense and action. I think the suspense element of your writing is your strongest suit. My only criticism is that I think you could actually build out these scenes a bit more. Like I think an extra para on the bagel scene would have been perfect. 



Author's Response:

Really good point, thanks for mentioning that! And thank you for reviewing the story, glad you liked it :)

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