Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2021 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loving these alternate endings/takes. 

They're fun to see and explore all the possible scenarios. 

But I still am hoping for one where she's found out to be their daughter, and having to face the consequences (be it legal/police wise, as it's not like she can just dissapear without anyone noticing)

Sandman579 brought up some great points in their review:
I wonder if Paulina cleaned up the records enough that when Ashley gets reported missing by her own parents, the police can't trace her activity back to the club. She can apparently kill security guards on a whim for cutting her under the table. If Ashley does somehow get raced back to her club can she just brush it off like anyone could've kidnapped her? Ray's exchange with Ashely at the club suggests he didn't connect the dots awhile back during dinner, but if police tell him and his wife the club was the last place Ashley was seen it might suddenly click for him. I'm interested to see if her parents do eventually realize what they've done and if she's still alive when the truth is revealed what will happen? Will Ashley get rescued and restored by authorities and her parents arrested but leaving her a broken shell? Will they feel guilt about what they've done to their only child and try humanize her again and salvage her mental state? Or, will they just go full hedonism and justify themselves by saying she isn't human any more and just a toy and keep tormenting her or killing her out of shame or guilt?

(Sorry to them for copying their review. Just trying to show their opinions on possible scenarios)

 

But yeah, it would be great to see some alternate takes on if they found out the tiny stripper was their daughter, maybe a few different takes on the reveal/consequences. 

Anyway, back to this chapter, it was fantastic as always loving seeing these and can't wait to see where it goes nexy.