[Report This]Date: November 20 2020 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great ending chapter. I did not expect the mom to appear. Like how she handled it. Loved how ashley was traumatized and her family was unaware. I think her being swallowed would have been funny too. I was waiting as i read it to see how it would play out. Almost missed the final chapter if it wasn't for you laser pen story. Can't wait to read more of yor stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! There will be more to come for the pen story soon!
Date: November 14 2020 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Honestly...I want to see Ashley's dad learn about the whole thing but not to enslave her. I want to see it played straight-all the horror, despair and guilt that it'd imply.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: November 11 2020 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Usually I'm not much into M/f but this was great! Loved all of the humlliation that was added by her dad and how it was written!
But my favorite parts definetily were the F/f sections due to my personal preferences. Her mom's attitude was great! And would've loved to see more from Rosita too haha Looking forward to future projects from you!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Currently working on my next project right now!