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Reviewer: Iunno Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2020 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yo Really Nice story so far!! I also like the subtle hints you've put in about how Paulina may let him have her if he has enough money, how she's greedy, and how small she'd make Ashley if it ever happened. Good job and I hope to see the story completed!!



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Thank you!  I hope you enjoyed the whole story!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2020 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ohhh wow things went south fast for Ashley. 

I really hope her dad is confronted by her when he sobers up over this, just to see the look on his face and the fact his drunken ass forced himself on his shrunken daughter. 

With that being said, I can't wait to read more :D 

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