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Reviewer: Qwajuu Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

I still come back to this story. It has to be my fav one on this site!

Reviewer: Qwajuu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2023 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

I would love to see more of what happens at the strip club. Still my fav story on here. Keep up the great work. 

Reviewer: Rolanrunn Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2021 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Are you going to continue the story?

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2021 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story but did one of the chapters get removed? It was one where Ashley's mom finds her after her dad and mom had sex?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!  That chapter was actually moved to my story "Miscellaneous Chapters / Alternate Endings."  That is because my co-writer and I decided to take the story in a direction that didn't match that ending.  

 

Hope this clears everything up! 

Reviewer: Qwajuu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2021 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yes! happy to see new chapters. Keep up the great work. 

Reviewer: Millionaireman17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2021 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is really, really good! I really enjoy the interactions between Ashley and her mother, seeing more interactions between them would be great. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback!

Reviewer: Qwajuu Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2021 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think you have a great world built here. It would be cool to have spin-offs of the stripclub. Have both positive and negative experiences with the other girls on other nights that the place is open. 

Either way this has been my Fav story this year, cant wait to see more. Keep up the great work!


Reviewer: Kell Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2021 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is REALLY good!! I LOVE the mom's attitude! I can't wait to see where you go with this!

Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2020 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love how nasty it got in that final chapter, dad giving his daughter PTSD with an idle fart, fantastic. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: Tehleris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2020 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great starter chapter.  I always love the premise of shrinkies going missing but it could never happen to me.  Funny what good amounts of money will make people do.  Loving the drunk Dad and Daughter stripper combo about to happen.  Really looking forward to more of this story.

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