[Report This]Date: August 14 2020 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
Wow..its over...
That was a great story! Very happy they all got together in the end.
Kind of confused where Phil went? Maybe I missed it..
I do agree with tom. It very nice to see you doing 2 different stories for me and him. Romantic for me and naughty for tom.
I loved your story and I'm hoping to see more!
Ps. In your romantic spin off can you add 2 characters named after me and my girlfriend? Ian is my name and Ana is hers. Please? If you could that would be awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! And for the constant reviews, always a joy reading them.
Phil was picked up by Aerin and taken to the ship she aquired. He will get more developtment in the sequel.
I loved both directions for the story, but it was impossible to do both without one suffering. I made the original story with a Ms Eve VS Students design, but fell in love with the characters, it was hard to write them in this way without breaking the developtment I had written. So my next idea was, splitting to a prequel and sequel.
Glad you enjoyed it, I am in the process of writing the sequel now!
100% yes, consider them added.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2020 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
Nice couple chapters! You had me worried about amy for a second...but now I'm worried about amy even more....Eve is nuts..
And I'm very happy Tom and alisha are getting better together. They have a long road ahead.
All good couple relationships are going forward at a healthy rate.
I'm hope everyone beats Eve.
Keep them coming!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading as always!
And yeah, Amy has gone from potentially turning bad to being the target of Ms Eve!
Yes they do, but they will make it!
Yes! I am glad at how they have been progressing.
Thanks again for reading and for the review!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2020 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
Oooh things are getting intresting! I love our two couples! They are so sweet and awesome together!
Tom And Alisha need to figure things out. She dosent seem to be very good with her emotions poor girl...
I'm very worried for amy. I hope she dosent become like eve. My guess is she going to try to be cruel but accidentally hurt Phil in the process and she gets super guilty?
I honestly think eve should kind of be in prison for sexual harassment...or at least getting fired.
I'm looking forward to more!
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for reading!
The latest chapters deal with the relationship between Tom and Aliesha. I wanted to get the two other couples chapters out before devling into their relationship.
Alongside the newest chapters also deals with Amy's feelings, I hope you enjoy the direction I took.
And thanks again for taking the time to review, hope you enjoy the latest chapters!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2020 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
A ton of great Chapters! I love this story!
Amy...nooooo...your going to drive him away or make him miserable! You should have gone to kalie...well this isnt going to end well...
Still I'm loving this story! There are to few gentle stories and if there are they usually never finished...
Please keep the chapters coming!
Ps. Sorry if I'm over reviewing
Author's Response:
Thanks again for reading! Glad you are enjoying it still.
And yes, Amy has taken a very, very bad decision.
Glad you are still enjoying it, I hope and plan to continue to the eventual end.
And unless there is some rule against it, feel free to review as much as you want! I love reading them, it helps me keep focus and encourages me to keep going and gives me a view on how the writing is and if its still enjoyable. So keep them coming! Love every one of them.
Thanks again for your reviews and I hope you enjoy latest chapters.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2020 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
I'm loving this story! I'm much more a gentle fan and this is going great!
Not a fan of Eve tho. Shes ok.
Aerin needs to tell Josh how much she loves him but shes stubborn like a tsundere lol.
Jack and Kairi is so cute! I love them together!
Does Aliesha care about tom? Not a lot of interaction with them lately. Is she worried about him in Eves hands? Be kind of sweet her worrying about him while lying in bed but not a sexual need but ynow a friend/lover?
And I'm betting Luke is enjoying his freedom
And will anyone die in this story? I'm gonna be sad if any of our guys die....
Author's Response:
So glad your enjoying my story!
And while there hash scenes, mostly involving characters like Eve, most will be gentle as the story continues, as the students evolve and learn from each other. However as any good story, you need an antagonist, and Ms Eve is this person, even is she is quite nasty.
She will, she just needs to figure out how.
And they are the prime couple, I am quite glad on how I have developed their story.
I focus on characters as I need, but take care in not moving too far on one over another. Aliesha will start to open up like the others have. But she is not as easily broken down as the others, being one who has grown up in an enviroment that encouraged her behaviour.
He did for the one night, but he will get some more time off.
While I don't like spoiling elements, I can safely guarantee nobody will die. This is pretty tame story with a focus on the developtment of these broken characters. Killing them would feel weird and take away from the story.
Thanks again for reading and I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters!
[Report This]Date: August 11 2020 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 Home Room
Intresting story so far!
I think the girls are starting to have feelings for their guys. Kind of cute!
Intresting to see where this goes!
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review!
And yes, as the story develops and these strangers start to live together, some are forming connections.
Thank you for reading my story and I hope you continue to enjoy the new chapters as they come.