Date: October 14 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
this is great i loev stories about teachers and this might be the best one on the platform thank you for making this i hope we see alice gomez again as she is my favourite but im exited for what you have next
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words! We'll see about Alicia.
Date: September 04 2020 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
Somehow (I'm stubborn) I still see Alicia pretty much tell Nancy... well, pretty much the last paragraph; not sure if asking her permission, or advice, or just to chat.
The unexpected message was a great idea! It didn't work 100% for me because I didn't remember he could shrink himself, so when I saw her misunderstanding I thought "wtf, really?" instead of "wow, I didn't see it coming"; but still good job!
PS
Ah, ok, by your reply I thought you had no idea where "Sentra" (the word) was coming from in your story :D
Author's Response:
Thanks. Sorry, I don't really understand your comment - Alicia doesn't tell Nancy anything in the last paragraph of any of my chapters.
I get what you are saying about the believability in the final part of this chapter, but let me just suggest that as you read, try to recall how poorly prepared Alicia was for this session: In this world's logic, Brett's wrist control is for communication only, and cannot be used to shrink or grow himself, but Alicia simply doesn't know that, since she didn't read the paperwork or training materials. She guessed that he was shrinking himself further because she felt him shrink without her doing anything, because it didn't occur to her that her kids had unlocked her phone and were pulling a prank. And there was a personal motive, because she wanted to believe that he was enjoying himself in her big ass.
Date: September 04 2020 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
Amazing! Definitely looking forward to the rest of this story overall, but for now, hell yeah for Mrs. Gomez's booty, looking forward for more of it in the next chapter, lol. I wasn't expecting her to be that flirty, nice touch!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
Alas, I still have several more teachers to cycle Brett through - Alicia is going to have to take a backseat in the next chapter, or this story will never end. :)
Date: September 04 2020 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
Another really cute and flirty teacher!
Part of me REALLY wants Alicia to find out what her kids are doing and implement shrunken foot punishment in her household that same night! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Lol I know what you mean.
Date: September 04 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
So far this story has balanced building the background and delving into Brett's experiences extremely well. I loved the latest two chapters, especially the growing lore to the world and how Lee-Riely had tricked Gomez into making the experience just a bit more memorable for Brett by having her wear her old thick socks. I'm hoping he has even more memorable experience with the next few teachers and am super excited to read the chapters about Issakinen. I'd love to see more overwhelmingly of Brett's senses, and hopefully more regret as he second guessed if the deal is worth it. If there's another chapter where he is mistaken for an offender or there's a cultural miscommunication that leads to him being disciplined without little remorse I think that would be super awesome. Regardless, I can't wait for whatever comes next.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I think you'll get what you are looking for with at least one future chapter.
Date: September 04 2020 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Alicia Gomez's massive ass
Another great chapter :D
(Oh and as for my review of the last chapter, I meant to say the other character, Amber Obrien was the one going to be a bitch to him and be trouble.
For this chapter, more great interaction with Mrs Gomes and Brett, some more feet action and some downtime.
I like butt action, but farts aren't really an interest of mine.
With that being said, it was still well written and Mrs Gomez was really enjoying having Brett up under and between her cheeks.
Excited as always to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
That's fair enough. Farting is one of my favorite giantess activities; it's hard for me to do butt stuff and not put it in.