[Report This]Date: September 02 2020 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet
The ending of the chapter was suspicious, however your story is about gentle or not violent giantesses , you should remember that. And it'll be good to have a chapter of Brett and the Awesome Amber trying to know each other , and then they'll fall in love with each other . Thanks you are the gtswood star this year
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment, but I disagree about my story. This is "gentle" inasmuch as I dont want the protagonist to be injured or killed, or for an antagonist to be a totally undeveloped psycho with no motivation for what they're doing. You should not expect that he is going to do everything 100% willingly and that every giantess is going to be sweet to him. I don't consider that the basis of an interesting story.
Amber is an antagonist, and there's no chance of them falling in love - let's leave it at that.
Date: September 02 2020 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet
Another great chapter, and lol, you 're definitely delivering. Awesome! Looking forward to the next one! And specially looking forward to booty content, but overall the story is pretty solid. Personally, I hope he stays at half an inch tall when she decides to go for it.
On an unrelated note, the final paragraph was a bit strange to me, it looked like Amber was talking to someone at first, it had me do a double take on it. But then again, English isn't even my first language so, maybe it's on me.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support!
All the "dialog" in the last segment was in Amber's thoughts. Amber was outside the back of the school waiting for a ride from her stepdad. She saw Alicia and Brett in the car (they did not notice her) and she realized Brett was the shrinkee and started thinking about what that entailed.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2020 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet
I was thinking that his mom will need to ask how he did before she decides if she makes it hell for him or not, and Alicia looks like she will tell her everything before she even asks... really, you made her so exhuberant that I'm hardly thinking of the Amazing Amber!
PS
I didn't remember who Sentra is, but it's right in front of my eyes as I'm writing this :)
(and google says it's sentra.it - bad google!)
Author's Response:
Ah, Mrs. Henderson already has her mind made up. She and her son have been quarreling for a while now, and she has steadily lost power over him as he has gotten closer to his sketchy banker dad. When she gets her turn, she's going to be the roughest and most vindictive giantess in the whole story.
There is no person named Sentra in my story... you and the previous poster confused me. Did you both miss the part where I said that Alicia's car is a Nissan Sentra?? Lol.
Date: September 01 2020 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet
Anoher great chapter, and teacher.
Loved the lively interaction between Brett and Mrs Gomez, the mouth scenes were great.
Plus her having some big feet that were cooking in those socks before Brett's arrival was a nice touch, gave Brett a much more flavorful feast XD
Not sure how I feel about Sentra, she seems like she's going to be a massive (pun intended) bitch to Brett, and could cause trouble to his so far, mostly pleasant and consensual fun.
Would love to see more Mrs Gomez, along with some returns from Ms Gwu and Ms Erenli :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
Lol who is Sentra?