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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2020 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Threats and resignation

I'll admit that I was tempted to suggest you "it's your first story, keep it simple, wrap it up, make a 2nd/3rd episode when you have a few more stories under your belt"; I'm glad I didn't!

 

I have a fondness for people getting screwed by the fine print or similar, so starting with this chapter I'm not exactly an unbiased observer, but anyway GOOD JOB!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the feedback! We're of the same mind on legally or socially binding minutiae; it's one of my favorite ways to see plots develop.

I have trouble finishing stories. I used to write a lot, but this is just my first time writing this kind of content. I think this story will probably need about 20 chapters, but if I go much beyond that, you can tell me to call it quits. :)

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