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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2020 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 - First round - Foot Training with Ms. Olivier

Very solid first story so far!

I'm not a writer, so I can't offer advice or good critiques or anything => I'll point out "particularly as Lee-Reilly made it seem like a" and I've done my good deed for the day ;)



Author's Response:

Oops, copy-paste error - thanks for pointing it out, I added the rest of the sentence.

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2020 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 3 - First round - Foot Training with Ms. Olivier

I really liked the in shoe stuff, hope you write more!



Author's Response:

I will do more feet stuff with other teachers for sure. Feel free to share any of your favorite ideas for shoe stuff or for what you'd like the next teacher to be like.

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