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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2021 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

Nice. I love full tour. Though I would also enjoy alternate chapters like your vore chapter 1 alternate end you posted. Specifically four. 1)where Sonoko swallowed sumi when she entered her mouth in the capsule. 2) when Sonoko was smaller then a villi that they or at least she gets absorbed into the bloodstream for more time in the body. And 3) when Sumi got stuck in Gins butt wrinkle, that she never found her way out, and her and Sonoko ended there permanently. And 4) Sonoko and Sumi get stuck in poop, and end up in a toilet that is flushed by accident. Also, I know they just got out of Gin's body, but is it bad that I hope that She ends up accidentally swallowing them again in a future chapter. For some reason my favorite part of this story is inside Gin's body. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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