Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2020 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 3: Maternal Affection

I'm not sure the hikes etc fit well here because of the quarantine; if she's proposing to try it out even after the ***19 is gone, she should say so.

 

Can't wait to see gf's reaction :D

Author's Response:

The way I imagined it, there's a big wooded area with paths behind her house, but I guess that wasn't explicit. :/

And I'm still trying to decide on what Rosey's reaction will be. I want it to be good! In my opinion, there's not enough exploration of what the gf thinks about the situation in these stories. 

Whatever I come up with, I hope you enjoy! 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2020 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Best Laid Plans...

I'm not on instagram so I have no way to find out - mom's inspiration has a fanart section, is this story going to end there? Anyway, I see you have good taste in stories :D

Author's Response:

I think if you go to that link you can still see Amber's pics. You don't have to have an Instagram. 

And when it comes to having good taste, you're telling me? 

When I see a review from you on a story, I know it's gonna be good! :) 

Hope you enjoy! 

Reviewer: b123 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2020 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Best Laid Plans...

This is a really great start! Really like how you set It up. I can definitely imagine scenes where she is holding him close to her chest and not noticing the his surprised reaction to being close to her breasts. Hopefully there would be some unaware scenes. Keep up the great work and can’t wait for the next chapter!