Date: September 04 2023 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hope you continue this story one day, looking forward to what happens next.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2020 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
You have a well placed writing style. I think you hit a good back and forth for dialogue and action. It's fun to read.
Definitely, love this dynamic. It'll be interesting to see how the characters evolve in their outlook. Kristen will have to become more gentle, but perhaps as John gets more comfortable that he is safe, maybe he tolerates his girlfriends violence more? Lots of ways you could go, all very fun.
Oh, and my only complaint is that you teased and then didn't have a giant couple scene.
Date: June 28 2020 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Really good story, I am really enjoying the premise of a giantess cruel to tinies, just to have her boyfriend shrunk, I also quite like how she is still sweet to him without removing the playful interactions, most stories immediately change the female into a cruel character but you did the opposite, which is fresh to see. Can't wait for more of this story^^. (Just a question is there going to be any interactions with other tinies in your story? Like she used to like to play with them but will that stop?)
[Report This]Date: June 28 2020 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome chapter, can't wait to see where this goes. Her attitude changes are great, where she calls him a bug because she's having fun then goes back to being kind.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for more.