Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2020 5:19 PM Title: Toy Reality

Really a fantastic story.  I wouldn't want to be worn by Auntie's nephew, but as you explained it's the universe minus the Earth which Auntie turned into the puzzle pieces.

One thing I would suggest, or rather plead would change, is part of your last chapter.  "The inhabitants of this underwear paradise don't have bodies or any senses at all..."  The not having body parts is understandable, as they are all souls; but shouldn't they sense, at least through vision, sound, taste, smell, and warmth, Auntie's womanhood and butt in all its glory?  If not for Auntie's amusement then for the pleasure of a truly Heavenly afterlife?

I am excited to see where Auntie takes this now that she knows all of her nephew's thoughts and desires, especially that he likes her being bossy and keeps thinking about her butt.

One thing I really have to commend you about.  In your previous reply to one of my comments you affirmed Auntie has the masseuse / masseur absorbed into one of her inner ass cheeks, and he will pretty much stay there forgotten.  That's hot!

Keep up the great work.  Can't wait for your next chapter.