[Report This]Date: August 12 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely amazing story. Both in the level of detail and the frightening realism of the character development. With an ending that just leaves you shivering. A very rare gem indeed. :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it, Theodous :-)
[Report This]Date: March 24 2008 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice work Nostromo. As always your story's are well thought out and your writing style includes enough detail to allow the reader a vivid mental projection of the characters. thank you.
Author's Response: Glad to see you liked this one, girlfood! i value your readership, my friend! Looking forward to your next project!
Date: March 24 2008 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, nostromo, a well-written yarn. Rather drwan out to begin with, and predictable, yet enjoyable as it led up to Josh's discovery. However, it was disappointing to learn that Allen was only 3". I had rather hoped he (and subsequently Josh) would be at least 5 to 7 inches. One more point: "Love is strange" would have been a better word than blind. O, and one more point: She is blonde (with an 'e') not blond - which is male. Thank you for the story!
Author's Response: thanks for reading. I prefer 3 inches, what can i say?
Date: March 22 2008 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I found it an interesting story, but quite far from violent. If there was any "violence" I probably didn't see it as such.
Tell me, what was the violent part of the story?
Author's Response: thanks for reading stylesrj! Well, well i suppose seeing your friend eaten alive qualifies as "violent" somehow, doesn't it? ;-)
Date: March 21 2008 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
this is really well written nostromo. Its a little violent for my taste but its an absolutley fantastic story. I read it quickly to get a feel for it so I am not in a great position to offer alot of critique but I did enjoy it.
I will reread it when i get some more time and tell you more of what I think about it.
we do not get enough insertion stories and stories about husband and wife so this was not only interesting to read but unusual. I am interested in checking out some of your other stories nostromo- you write really well!
congrats on an excellent violent shrinking story!!!
Author's Response: thnak you so much for the comment, her tiny pal! glad you liked this one!